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Creepy Academy App! by zZLazyWolfZz Creepy Academy App! by zZLazyWolfZz
I'm so sorry everyone!! I mixed up this oc and my other oc from Hell-Gate-University!! but now its fix, I hope, if I need to change things again please tell me!!

forgot to add in there, but he changes his looks every week!
app for a group imma in~ and with his last name. its spelled W-I-N-C-H-E-S-T-E-R. not winDcheAster. i put an 'a' and a 'd' in it. sorry! i do rp! just send a note or just comment. i will soon update the base. also his race isn't Déva/elf, its Deva/Demon. now.
sorry if its still a little confusing for some! but im still trying to work this out ok!! and he is not godmoding! in fact he is very weak! it just seams he is but really he isn't!!

                        

Name: Dante Winchester




Staff/Student:  student




Age: around his 20s.




Species: Hybrid(Déva\demon)




Height/Weight: height: 6’11 ft to 7’ ft tall/Weight: 119 lbs

 




Sexuality: bisexual




Abilities:
is able to control gravity, to product concussive forces, and (almost)master fire manipulation




Weapon(s): his Gun Gauntlets




Personality:
sweet, nice, mean, harsh, evil, somewhat shy, careless at times, and caring



Likes:

+Cute things
+Sweets
+Fighting
+Bugs
+Blood
+People playing/messing with his hair

 


Dislikes:

-Ugly things\People
-Normal food(such as hamburgers and things like that)
-Doing nothing
-Being bored
-Annoying people\things
-Being tolled what to do
-People playing/messing with his hair




RP Sample: Ex 1: Dante: *walks to the front of the school*..im going here…

Ex 2: walking up to the front of the school with my hands in my pants pockets I sigh looking at the school. “so im going to this blood hell of a school…thanks you my grateful, un powerful foster da!!’” I say in a grumpy tone.



History:

 When he was 5 he was arrange to married a girl, Lilly. With this they moved to the human world. “If you attack or harm a human, priest, or noble you will be send to a Dimensional Prison.” He father tolled him. Him, Lilly, and there their maids and butlers all moved into a house. Both Lilly and Dante felled in loved at first glance, but things changes on his 7 years old, his demonic and his powers kick in when a priest try to rape Lilly. But when the police came, the priest tolled them. “Arrest this child! He attacked me out of nowhere when I try to save this girl!” so he did. Dante stay in priest for 6 years. its was 3 but his father added 3 more year. so he didn't get out till he was 13. At this age he was allowed to marry Lilly. Lilly was ready to marry, but Dante wanted to get to know her better. He did after 5 years being friends to dating to marrying. At the age of 19 he got married to Lilly Smith. Everything was good for them until one faithful day. It was a beautiful day; Dante and Lilly were out and having fun, but then it all when dark. A car racing down the road hits everything in its path on both the road and sidewalk. The car hit both Lilly and Dante. When they fell, men in black suits got out of the car and stabbed Lilly in her heart. Dante try to save her, but some guy shot him in his right shoulder. So when he got to her, the men where gone and she was laying there on the road dyeing. He holds her in his arms crying. “I’m sorry I let this happen to you…I’m sorry.” He was the only thing he said before she kissed him with her final breath and said.” I love you.” Then she faded away. Her spirit hugs him before it walk to the Heavens. When the police came and saw, they though he did this to his wife, thus they send him to jail again. No human jail, a ‘special Demon Prison’. This ‘prison’ helps control his demonic abilities and trained him to become stronger and a better person, but really the 'Prison' was there to make him a cold blooded killer.

But when the Dragons (It might not sound scary, but they are most feared everywhere.) heard about this, they wanted Dante. Not as a killer but as a member. So they pretended to be the police that got Dante and tolled him all about the so called 'Prison' they really were going to take him to and about how Dragons wanted him since the men who killed Lilly also killed some members of the Dragons. That the main reason they wanted Dante. For going after the same men for killing their love ones. Of course Dante toke the offer to kill the man who killed his wife! And thats how he became second in charge of the gang. After a few months into this, people of the gang stated to disappear and be killed off. Dante knew something was up; but couldn't do anything since he didn't know where this was coming from or why this is happen. The leader of the gang tolled the remaining members to go home and forget about Dragons. And thats what they did, so did Dante. He said his goodbyes and left the gang, going back to his family when he go the call saying his mother is ill. But really it was just to get him back home. Going back home was a good yet bad thing. his father was sending him to an Academy for people like him. Only because his father hated Dante and didn't want him in the family anymore. And his mother and sister loved him and wanted him to stay with them. Thus he doesn't want his mother and sister to be abandon by his father; he goes to the academy.

Extras: (If u want to rp just add a comment or send a note to me)
+ his right eye is a green yet gold color and his left is a crystal dark blue color.

+ in time he will soon master his true powers. but he can never really master his Mana abilities. so when using to much, he will faint or
fall asleep for a few sec, mins, hrs, days, mouths, or even years. depending on how much he uses.

+he will never date or fall in love with anyone. only because he made a promise to his late wife, Lilly. but in times of need, she will help him only by giving him hints, riddles, or surges of mana to him. but it hurts him as well when she does this.

+with the fact that his mother is a Half 
Déva, he can control gravity and have have the ability to have more then one soul in his body, but he doesn't want to share his body, thus is is why their is no other souls then his in his body.

+A 
Déva is where you are a demon but you a host that can contain your soul with two others. with this, people call 
Déva Slit Narcissists. or Slit personality people. They are very looked down to many.

+can't use his demonic powers like most demons because of his Déva blood. it seals the demon, fire manipulation and mass control, powers in till he he is ready. So you could call him very weak right now.

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:iconlotusjadethorn:
LotusJadeThorn Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wanna RP with my character, a student called Nokomis? Do note me if so! ^_^
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:iconzzlazywolfzz:
zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ah ok!
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:iconanimecrafter101:
animecrafter101 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student General Artist
are we still continuing the rp?
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:iconzzlazywolfzz:
zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yeah sorry been busy with things.
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animecrafter101 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Student General Artist
its totally fine, >u<
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animecrafter101 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student General Artist
so cool ouo





do you want to rp?
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:iconzzlazywolfzz:
zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thanks~



sure~
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animecrafter101 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student General Artist
okai, so i'll be using Kate
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ok~ do you want to start or me
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:iconanimecrafter101:
animecrafter101 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student General Artist
could you start? i'm really bad at starting things q-q
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
its ok~

waking up in his batman pattern pj's pants and a black under shirt that has the Batman logo in the middle. his hair,colored golden with his bangs green and shoulder length, in a messy and loose ponytail. bags under his eyes from the all week gaming, not sleeping at all. he has slips on as he walks into the hallway. his right hand filled with a cup of coffee and his other on the back of his neck." Man...I like y virtual world this this one..." he says looking outside the window.
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animecrafter101 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Kate walked by, her short hair bouncing
with every step, her red tank-top and her
usual skinny jeans and boots, she kept to
the shadows, walking gracefully through
the path.
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
he looks up, sniffing the air. he smells a girl coming his way. he turns around. "if your there, come on out." he says
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Rythurmorn Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"But where he was really is was a very well know and very scared of, Dragons. It might not sound scary, but they are most feared everywhere. When they tolled them they take a cop car that had him in it, they just toke him to train him. So before letting go of Lilly, he promised her and himself that he won’t love nor fall for anyone else again. With this, he became the second in charge of the gang. All he wants to do is now kill the men that killed Lilly and wants to know why."

There are too many errors in this ^ portion to really understand.
Also why would they send him to a demon prison to train him to be a killer after they saw that he killed a girl? Wouldn't that be more like a demon dojo?

It's starting to look a bit better and make a little more sense, but it still needs some tweaking. Good to see some improvement though, keep it up. u vu b
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
TT~TT
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Rythurmorn Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heyhey, don't worry. We're not mad at you. We're helping. XD Like a tutor or mentor. :)
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:iconzzlazywolfzz:
zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
you sure...
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Rythurmorn Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mhmm
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
well I will update it when I don't have writer's block!
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Rythurmorn Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
We look forward to it~
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yeah! *smiles*
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Rythurmorn Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok. Renka. I'm gonna call you Renka, ok? *breathes* Please put his little history section you've got in the Extras, into the actual HISTORY... section. That we added to the bio... and told everyone to add in...

ALSO... In this history section that you need to fill out... please explain how;
1) He met and married a woman while in "demon prison" for 13 years of his life. Did they marry when he was 5?
2) He went to "demon prison" for harming a priest.... Why would he go to "demon prison"? That sort of behavior is encouraged by any and all demons!
3) How he mastered his "true" powers..... in 13 years... in prison. You know that's... not how that works, right? If anything he'd have been probably put in solitary confinement in a cell that drained him of all his energy to keep him from attempting to train in any of his abilities the first time the guards saw a peep out of him. This is all assuming he even went to "demon prison" in the first place for doing nothing wrong by any demon ever's standards.

Please um... Please re-think his history through a little bit... more... mkay~? Thank you hon~ u vu
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yours a sugar cookie! and I will.
i just this this undescriptive...i just did what Mr. Matrix said. s I wouldn't get into anymore trouble...but I just I have to very detailed like everyone else right...well I will and make sure its readable and understanding  sugar cookie~~
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Rythurmorn Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hah. Thank you hon. It's not so much the details as just... an explanation for everything. Because when you're really vague, it's impossible to understand. xD
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
sworry...
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Rythurmorn Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem~
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thanks again
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LotusJadeThorn Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ooh, a fire master? Interesting to see how our characters get along then XD
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yeah~ lets~~ XD
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:iconlotusjadethorn:
LotusJadeThorn Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Feel free to note if you wanna RP :D
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ok!~
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DamienRhys Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist
Hey there, just letting you know that you still need to add your history section, and it would be best if you changed the section saying that ANYONE wants to stare into his eyes forever, since saying that ANYONE will want to is what we call godmodding, godmoding, puppeteering, or any other number of terms that generally mean you're controlling what happens to other players without their permission (or insinuating that you do). So.. that bit's going to have to change. I also wanted to add, but seem to have forgotten previously, that manipulating fire is fine, but being a 19 year old 'master' fire manipulator is a bit extreme.
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
o-ok Mister grumpy Sugar Cookie. I will change things up. just don't get all bossy on me, please.
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DamienRhys Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist
Thank you, dear. I'm not being bossy, though, I'm being an admin, which makes enforcing the rules my job here. o 3o
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
butt to me it sounds bossy!! I like it when you don't talk like an admin and talk to me like a friend...or Batman...*looks away*
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DamienRhys Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist
I always try to be friendly, it may be that my manner of speech seems a bit uptight, though if that's the case I'm afraid you might have to get used to it. >-> It's pretty much how I talk. And I'm not sure how else to word things when I need to be an admin, though, there's a certain level of professionalism required, as well as a blend of friendliness. I try to be helpful, naturally, while not being harsh about mistakes, but sometimes there's not really a way around it. Such is the life of an adult I suppose.
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
fine fine...but try to explain things as if you're talking to a little kid.please..so much words.. if its not manga,words from books,or rps...I lose my place and have to start over..which I don't want to do Mr. Sugar-Batman-Cookie.
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DamienRhys Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist
Hah, well, consider it good practice. One thing I do want to accomplish while I'm helping run this group is to help the younger generation (that's most of you guys here) get better at RP. When I was your age, I learned to write better by writing with people who were better at it than me, and by reading. Kind of like mentoring.
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yes Sinsi. understood. I will become a better writer and RPer.with your help~*smiles*
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devilsMistreated Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
koolz!
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thanks
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devilsMistreated Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
np
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Akiho-Shire Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
he's so cute~
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
aww thanks!...but i dont think he is going to be in the academy..since i think i did something wrong...i thught i did it right..guess i didnt...
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Akiho-Shire Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What had you done wrong?
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i guess i filled it out wrong..i dont understand it...i filled it out....
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Akiho-Shire Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think they may want you to go with their profile description instead of that one, or something like that. Maybe
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yeah i did...
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Akiho-Shire Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, wait, what did you send to the group note? You know, whenever you sent your character app. What is it you sent them? Cause in the new rules it asks you to send it with a certain word to know you read the rules
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zZLazyWolfZz Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
i got in!!!~ do you have a oc in this group, if sooo~ wanna rp~
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