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a world where Celestia killed Nightmare Moon

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Mega-PoNEO Featured By Owner May 21, 2018…
:iconcolonelplz: Celestia, what have you done?!? You've changed the future! You've created a time paradox! (As a result of Nightmare Moon's death, Twilight never meets her Ponyville friends, so FiM never happens. Problem solved, series over.)
goldorakx69 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2017
she never fogive her self for this! the pony try make the princess happy and say * you got no chouse princess you do all to stop her and save but in the end....* but celestia say* i kill my little sister so i will never be the princess of equestria!* the word of be a big shock for the pony and the pony try to make change her mind but celestia say * dont worry my , no, pony of equestria i will continue control the sun and i will control the moon for now on but i will never rule again and  i will hide forever* celestia remove all her royal stuff and say * dont try to stop me please! this my last order!* the royal guard salute for last time but all then cry for not only lost luna but for celestia to! celestia use her magic
to create a coffin for her lost sister and she take it with her and wake away and no pony see celestia again! somepony think celestia she suisided in a cave,somepony say she hide in a cave and continue her control of the sun and moon, but what the pony say the mose is she in the star alive continue to watch then. a rumore who say everynight you can heir a sad song in the everfree forest but all pony know is celestia but all the pony who try to fond her! fail to fond the sad and broken princess and she never be fond. the pony of equestria try to fond celestia but no pony fond her. but 1000 later a litter filly fond her in a cave were she try hide form a timber wolf who kill her mother and father. the
poor filly think she gion to die the same way and she never see her big brother. the little filly close her eyes think this is the end and one of the timber wolf junp on her but something stop the timber wolf. the little filly open her eyes and the timber wolf be stop on the air by a yellow gold aura magic. the filly turn and see a white alicorn rainbow mane. the alicorn destriod the timber wolf. the filly thanks her ask name but the alicorn turn back on with sad face. the little filly remenber something and say * you are princess
celestia! oh my gosh my gosh hi hi hi i fond the fond princesss. the filly stop and see a gold and silver coffin, the filly come more close to see who is inside and be shock to see
nightmare moon inside. celestia say* this is mare who use to be my little sister and i try to stop her but no mader i try she dont stop so got no chouse to kill my sister. the filly be sad and she know what is to lost somepony and she tell her she lost her mother and her father cuz timber wolf. celestia be shock and she be very sorry. and ask if she got somepony lelf? and the filly say her big brother is a royal guard but his very besy on his job. the filly tell celestia wy she be in the everfree forest cuz her village in be atk by bandy and kill all the pony in the way! celestia ask if all equestria is like this now. the filly tell is like cuz king Darkblood and all the pony life in tyrany, all the royal guard fight the darkknight of king darkblood, all the pony start to losse hope, plus king darkblood use dark magic but mom say only alicorn magic can stop him celestia look the filly and see something in her. celestia be shock to see alicorn soul in this filly. so celestia tell her she cant fight cuz she made a promese to her self to never rule equestria but she help! the filly smily think she goin to see the princess stop darkblood. but celestia tell she lever this plase cuz she seal her soul here and if the seal broke she die! the filly be sad to not see celestia kick the ass of darkblood. but celestia tell her is a way to stop darkblood and is you become alicorn. the filly be shock. celestia tell her cuz only pony with alicorn soul
can become real alicorn and is the same herself and her sister but one you be alicorn is for live so i ask you to you want save equestria if is yes i will transform you in a alicorn but no i will not but if i transform you so will live long time like me so you can protect pony i fail to protect but first tell me your name little one. the filly smile and say my name is Twilight Sparkle Princess celestia and yes i want save equestria! celestia say ok Twilight is to be the new alicorn of equestia. celestia transforme Twilight to a alicorn. celestia say* now i will teach all you all magic i can but tell the name of you big brother so i can tell him you are save with me! twilight say my bbbff is name is Shinig armor Princess celestia. celestia use her to call shinig armor with a letter with a spell of teleportion to make him be here. later shinig armor see letter apared face to him so shinin read the letter
and spell teleport shining in the cave and face to him the lost princess celestia but before shining a time to say something celestia tell him what is apone on his parent. shining be sad and shining ask were his little sister. celestia look in her back. shining see twilight be a life but shinig be shock to see his little sister be now a alicorn. celestia tell she want save equestia and i will teach all she need to the future but first shining tell all royal guard to come here please. shining go tell his captein he fond princess celestia but she
want to see her now. captien go with shining and one houre later and  the captien see on the princess celestia but before the captien time to inclin celestia tell him the new alicorn who will save equestia. the captien be surpire to see the little sister of one his guard. celestia tell him all to do to protect equestia were she prepare twilight and will ready
in 15 years so protect all the pony but do not tell were i am cuz is will doom equestia if darkblood me and twilight were she not ready to fight him but 5 little filly see all this, twilight know thos pony and she say* GIRLS! twilght start to run to then and she say* you all a life! the 6 filly cry of happyness. celestia say twilight know thos pony?
and twilight say yes thos are my best friend princess celestia! the 5 filly say PRINCESS CELESTIA! the eco resone in the cave. Twilight say yes and she make me alicorn look!
one say wow Twilight got wing awosome a new fly budy!. one say you become alicorn but i belive is inpossible! one alicorn party! one wow you look like a princess! and celestia
say * cuz she the new princess and i will teach her all she need for her future but you fond so you will be here with twilight but what is your my little pony(is long time i not say this) one of the them say* my name is Rainbow dash! one say my name is applejack! one say my name is Pinkame diana pie but can call me Pinkie pie! one say my name is Rarity and the shy one right in my back her is fluttershy! Twilight say yes Fluttershy is very shy and she very feared. celestia say oh is ok little one but were your family? the filly
start be sad. Rarity say the bandi capture them! celestia say * captien go save the family of thos filly and come here with them ok! the captien say YES PRINCESS I WILL SAVE
THOS PONY GOT MY WORD! the captein say* ok all you we mose save the pony of the village so move out but half us will be here to make the cap base ok Shining Armor you will be the captein of this base so were save the pony put save here we go on the primery mission ok. the Guard say YES SIR! and the royal guard move! celestia say well is ok
my little pony everything will ok but now is time of some leson! twilight yeah i love learn new thing hihihihi! rainbow say eh us to? celestia say yes but mosely twilight but all teach for your future ok. all the filly say yes. the end for now. note king Darkblood is prince Blueblood who use what is remade of the blood of nightmare moon to use a powerfull
spell to transforme him to a alicorn bu the plan fail transforme him on more more big jeck cuz all brony know so this very bad
pkpmachinegunner Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2016
No matter how evil your sister is you never want this to happen.
Lyra-senpai Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Shaeldariel Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
And who are you, the Luna said,
that I must bow so low?
An alicorn of a different coat,
that's all the truth I know.
In a coat of white or a coat of blue,
a pony still has horn,
And mine is long and sharp, my friend,
as long and sharp as yours.
And so she spoke, and so she spoke,
that lady of the night,
But now the stars weep o'er her sky,
with no one there to hear.
Yes now the stars weep o'er her sky,
and not a soul to hear. (c) Sorry for this...)
Miz-Jynx Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Damn, heavy shit man!   
Mdragonflame Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ShatMem Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
Ah heeeeellll nah take some L85A2 ya sonofabitch!
KraangTheConqueror Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
MegaPatron Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
nuuuu dah feels! ;_;
pip-pip-rah Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ringtailmaster Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014
truly sad and filled of heartbreaking feelings, powerful scene, could be an excellent alternative story, awesome job n_n
KillerTeddyBear94 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so sad :( but yet, so beautiful :heart:
Minecraft111323 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Student Digital Artist
poor luna celestia what youre maked crying fella (Reactions) Menma Honma (This is unfair) [V1] Cry a Puddle 
Smokeythesleddog Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So sad.
ANIMALDRAGON Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
but then twilight would not have found her friends ;w;
MugenSeiRyuu Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
"You left me no choice, sister..."
WanderSong Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
How tragic! :(
cobralash Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
This made me have to catch my breath.
Tvtyrant Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2014
Building better worlds. All of them, better worlds.
FlockOfMoosen Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
Holy shit!
Artention Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So sad... D:
schneelocke Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014
Ouch. Damn, that hit me right in the gut.

Powerful piece.
aqdrobert Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Celestia: Discord! What have you DONE?
Discord: Pfft! I end the threat of Nightmare Moon forever, and you fuss about little details, 'Tia.
KraangTheConqueror Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
I'm join on Discord's side.
jyroman53 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ded not a big soup-rice *snif*
BubbleSweet Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
Waaaah!  nightmare moon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Waaaah! 
Rippypaws Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aaaw, i love nightmare moon:(
GreenFrogRibbit Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
This is so sad!
Epixelle Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:~( wow. That would probably be more realistic, since they couldn't have her die in the show....
ULTRADJ4EVER Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Wow, depressing and deep
silberhase Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
This is very sad and touching.
jardape Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Can you kill something that can change into blue cloud?
And Celestia would use elements to heal her. And because nightmare would leave dead body, there would be normal Luna after she would be healed.
cajobif Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
So happy it didn't happen that way. MLP without Luna... No.

But, wonderful work nevertheless.
hopefox Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nightmare Moon doesn't look quite so evil now that she's dead. That's so sad.
KraangTheConqueror Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
You don't have to lost tears for her. She is just an evil wicked beast.
thmanwiththeplan Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Man, you really like drawing sad celestia.
RedCard94 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
All I can say is this:…
ShadeWolfBuizel Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
T^T oh my god...
MlpSonicFlashOfDoom Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is just.....Truly a sad story and brings out so much more emotions given I'm listening to study music (Yet I'm here) I'm so sorry Tia....I'm so so sorry 
Dendris Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
E-Ende... plz... bring her back. :iconcrying--plz:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Dr. X: ...... I know the feeling..... more than any other.....
KopaLeo Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Somehow this reminds me of The Lion King. I sometimes wonder whether Scar mourned Mufasa in the gorge, at least for a moment.
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Lumdrop Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
The comic bookish style of this is radical ^^
I'm digging the background most of all.
naruto1700 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014
Awesome and poor Luna and Celestia
ChaudStarpower Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
LUNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :iconcryingplz:
Wolf-fang4 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
GraphiteHeart-Pony Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014
ermagerd NOOOOO!
so sad!
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