This picture really does look good though. There's something kind of emotional in the art style. It really makes you feel like you're out there enjoying the rain with her. Something about her facial expression tells me that she finds the rain to be a relief from something. Maybe it's that she was overheated, or covered in mud a second ago, or maybe it just feels really soothing, but the shading and everything you did just looks realy nice. If I were going to change something though, it would be the color scheme of her chest piece. I would probably have made that a brighter gold color instead of the shades of brown you used. A little more yellow shading on the upper half of it would do the trick.