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Chapter 1 - A Visitor from outer Space
Chapter 2 - Why won't you wake up?
Chapter 3 - Friend or foe? Or maybe none of both at all?
Chapter 4 - The stranger's introduction
Chapter 5 - Zenki's Dilemma
Chapter 6 - Red to the Rescue
Chapter 7 - Crashing Karuma's Party

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Chapter 1 - A Visitor from outer Space

It's a nice and sunny day at the Enno Shrine.

Chibi Zenki is sleeping at the rooftops as usual.
He wakes up as his stomach starts to grumble, picks his right ear, yawns and says: "Heh. I could eat a really big Hyouinomi right now." :bademoticon: 
Zenki starts sniffing, but is disappointed as he doesn't smell any Hyouinomi or any scent of food whatsoever.: I 

Something is wrong today. Grump 
Suddenly, Zenki notices a foreign scent and spots a strange, humanoid, female creature.                        hide
The girl quickly jumps from a nearby rooftop into a tree, only her eyes can be seen as she carefully hides herself.

Zenki isn't bothered just lets out a bored "Heh."
He lays down again and continues to watch the girl. Bored 

She curiously eyes him from her hiding spot and makes a cute smile. Meow :3
The girl picks a few fruits and makes a little basket.
She carefully puts the fruits into the basket and jumps to Zenki's place.
Zenki continues watching her and doesn't bother to move.
The girl keeps smiling and presents Zenki the food.:eatingahamburger:
Zenki's belly starts grumbling.
He takes a fruit, sniffs at it, carefully inspecting it before putting it into his mouth.                    I'm hungry...Get in my belly!
She makes an even more adorable smile as Zenki eats one fruit after another till the basket is empty.
Zenki doesn't even thank her, but she happily jumps away and is gone.

Chapter 2 - Why won't you wake up?

The now stuffed Chibi Zenki goes into the Enno Shrine and notices that everyone else is still sleeping.
That's very unusual, as Akira is often the first one who gets up and starts working at his art.

Zenki goes into Chiaki's room and finds Chiaki sleeping with Lulupapa on top of her.
Chibi Zenki gets mad and starts poking Chiaki in the face, but nothing happens. Rage

Angry Chibi Zenki runs off, searching for the strange creature, he met earlier, believing her to be the culprit now.
The girl is nowhere to be found and Zenki starts moving along the rooftops.
Shikigami-chou is bustling as ever, only the residents of the Enno Shrine seem to be affected by this strange event.

Zenki now gets really worried. "Curses! What if Karuma or her servants attack while I'm like this?! I will be screwed!" Scared

He runs off into the forest and finds Karuma, Guren, Goura, Anju and two Hyouijuu standing at the bottom of a well, talking to each other.Rainbow of Rumors 
Zenki lets out a silent curse and quickly leaves, going back to the village rooftops. (Karuma and her kin don't notice him)

While moving along the rooftops, he spots the creature again.
This time she is petting a small Hyouijuu, feeding it some fish.
The Hyouijuu is happy and jumps onto her lap like a dog. 
Dog Sitting Meow Shake Fish
Zenki now thinks that he is right and slowly approaches without being noticed.

Chapter 3 - Friend or foe? Or maybe none of both at all?
As the girl's new "dog" suddenly curls up and starts growling, she looks at Chibi Zenki who leaps at her.    Jamming to mah stereo:slinky:
The girl swiftly gets up and gently sidesteps Zenki's attack, which causes him to fall face first onto the roof tiles. 

As Zenki gets up and starts growling as well, the girl puts the small Hyouijuu into her basket and quickly places it somewhere safe.
House Dog Sleeping
Zenki doesn't ask any questions and attacks her again.
The girl sidesteps him again and he makes another faceplant at the roof tiles. Jamming to mah stereo:slinky:
Zenki gets up and exclaims: "Stop avoiding me, you stupid woman! Fight me like a man!" Rage 
The girl starts to chuckle, which makes Zenki even more annoyed.Take it all off! Angered 

Chibi Zenki clenches his fists, grumbles and runs off to the Enno Shrine, because he can't beat that girl.NOOO, DUN LEAVE MEH HEER ALONE 
He quickly enters Chiaki's room again and now wildly shakes her and screams: "Curses, Chiaki! Transform me, immediately!"
Chiaki takes and cuddles Lulupapa. They both continue sleeping.snuddlecat 

Zenki snatches the Bracelet of Protection away and reads Chiaki's dairy, searching for the spell to break his seals.Bookworm Boing 
After finding what he wants, Zenki holds the Bracelet of Protection above his head and exclaims:

"And now I awaken the Demon God! Unlock the holy spell with the secret sword! Break free, Vajura on Ark! Rise up, Zenki!" :angry: 
(this line was taken from the Kishin Douji Zenki anime, all credit goes to the translators of the English dub - the fixed version was made by ZTheGS)

First, nothing happens, but as Zenki gets really mad, the Bracelet of Protection starts glowing and his seals break. :bademoticon: 
Demon God Zenki hits his head on the ceiling: "Ow!" Stare

Zenki involuntarily bows and gets outside, exclaiming: "The God Zenki has risen!"La la la la 
...and walks straight into a doorframe, hitting his head again. Zenki: "Curses!" :bademoticon:

An unseen girl starts laughing at him. Giggle 

Chapter 4 - The stranger's introduction

Zenki gets mad and calls out: "Who is there? Show yourself!":angry:
The creature from earlier jumps out of a tree, cracks her neck and gives him a cute smile while nudging her head to the side. Lilac Wink emoticon
Zenki is confused: "You did this to my friends, didn't you?!" :OhNoYouDont:
The girl gives off a confused purr. O_o
Zenki: "Huh? Can't you speak, woman?"Smoking

Before he can continue saying anything the girl smiles at him and says: "What are you talking about? I didn't do anything to your friends." Meow :3

Zenki: "What?! I don't believe you! Who are you anyway?! ..."Smoking
Girl: "May I introduce myself? I'm Red, a well-known heroine across the entire..." w00t! 
Before Red can continue saying anything, Zenki bolts out: "I don't care! Tell me what you did to them or I will beat it out of you!" I am PISSED OFF! 

Red: "I already told you, that I did nothing to your friends." Pray

Zenki lets out an angry growl and glares at her.Angered

Red sighs, calmly walks up to him and gently caresses his cheek with her hand.Petting is sensual! 
Zenki is even more confused now, blushes and quickly jumps away from her.I'm on fire! 
"Oi! Woman! Why aren't you afraid of me? What is wrong with you?!"omfg

Red nudges her head to the side and says: "Why are you so mad at me? I didn't do anything to your friends." No, I disagree!
Zenki is still very confused: "..." :? (Confused)

Red: "And you are cute when you are angry, even though I've just met you." :blushing:

Zenki is now even more weirded out: "Ok...? So you didn't put a strange sleep curse on my friends?" :| (Blank Stare)

Red smiles in the most adorable fashion possible. :meowlove:

Zenki starts feeling all strange and is still blushing: "Uh...? So can you help me to find the real culprit or lift the curse?" Pissed

Red: "Of cause, I can try to help you find them." :happybounce: 

Red makes strikes an innocent and humble pose and says: "But... Eh... I don't know how put this curse on them... So? Do you have a scent or trail or something we could follow?" Laughing my ass off!

Red: "What's wrong with you? Hello, uh... I don't know your name..." :? (Confused)

Zenki stands there like a statue, still blushing: "I... I'm Zenki... Uh..." Pissed

Red: "Huh? That's a nice name." Meow :3

Zenki: "You think so? Hehehe..." Pissed

Red is confused and asks Zenki again if everything is alright.
Zenki stands there like a statue for what feels like ages, till he answers her: "I... I never thought... I never thought I would call a girl cute, but..." Nosebleed emoticon 
Red nudges her head to the side and makes a questioning face.
Zenki stares at her for a long time. :nosebleed:
Red gets worried and pokes him.:swallowpoke: V2 
Zenki: "You are cute..." :nosebleed:
Zenki passes out, scaring Red and causing her to leap a meter into the air! I think I've fainted. Eyepopping 

Chapter 5 - Zenki's Dilemma

Chibi Zenki wakes up and finds himself at the fireplace inside the Enno Shrine, laying on the pillow, grandmother Saki usually sits on.
As he can tell, it's already at night-time, as the moon shines through a window.
As Zenki gets up and sits on the pillow, he finds the Bracelet of Protection laying beside him.

Zenki wonders where Red went and if the others are still cursed. :worries:
While thinking of Red, he starts to blush again and mutters to himself: "What happened to me? Why did I feel so strange when she smiled at me? I never felt this way. Did she poison me when I ate those fruits?" Nuu Heart
As Chibi Zenki sits cross-legged, he continues thinking and mutters: "But I don't feel sick. Instead, I feel all warm and fuzzy..." Stupid Me!

After thinking for a few more minutes, I finally dawns to him what might have happened: "This is impossible! This can't be!" Jawdrop 
"The great... Zenki-Sama... can't... fall in love! I don't even know this stupid woman and she has already put some strange curse on me!" Nuu

Zenki continues muttering to himself, gets up and goes to check if his friends have finally woken up, only to find out that they are still sleeping. This worries him and he decides to climb onto the rooftop and go to his favourite place.

Zenki tries to sit down, but he can't, his body still trembling from the thought of that girl that completely messed with his feelings.
He makes a sad sniffing noise, curls up and starts sobbing. Waaaah!

Chapter 6 - Red to the Rescue

Meanwhile... Red is sniffing around, but can't find a trace of the person or monster who cursed Zenki's friends.
As she hears someone sobbing, she goes to check it out, only to find Zenki, who has fallen asleep with tears coming from his eyes.Waaaah! 

Red lets out a soft: "Nawww..." and gently removes the tears with her finger.
She sits beside Zenki and stares up to the stars, letting out a sad sigh herself and closes her eyes. Grr. 

After sitting like this for a few hours, Red hears a laugh.
She opens her eyes and sees a young man with a wolf levitating in mid-air.
Chibi Zenki quickly opens his eyes and starts growling.

The man sends his wolf to attack Chibi Zenki, who starts cursing, but before the wolf can bite Zenki, Red glares and slaps it.:hitting:
This sends the wolf flying into a rock while the man screams: "No! Kokutei!" and flies after the wolf.

Chibi Zenki is surprised by Red's strength and says: "Heh. Good job." B-) (Cool) 
Red: "Who are those guys?" Grump 
Zenki: "They are the, self-proclaimed <smirks>, Inugami Roh and his pet wolf Kokutei. They have been bothering me for quite a while, always snatching my Hyouinomi away from me!" Angered

Red nudges her head to the side, gives Zenki a cute smile and hugs him. :meowlove:
Chibi Zenki is confused and starts struggling: "This isn't the time for hugging! Beat them up! They deserve it!" Angered

Red sighs and snuggles her face into Zenki's hair.Tight Hug
Zenki: "?!" Nosebleed emoticon

Roh and Kokutei take their chance and attack again, but suddenly Red grows a fuzzy, white tail and slaps them away like bugs.
The Inugami and his wolf are sent flying and blast off like Team Rocket!Falcon punchglitter01
Zenki makes a horrified face at seeing such power coming from such a gentle slap. Nuu

Chapter 7 - Crashing Karuma's Party

Karuma, Goura, Guren, Anju and a few Hyouijuu are standing outside a well in the forest. Rainbow of Rumors
Suddenly they hear a man and a wolf letting out a horrible howl in unison: "Waaaaooooouuuuuuugyaaaa!!!" glitter01
Karuma and her crew look up into the sky as they see Roh and Kokutei passing by, crashing into some treetops in the process.
Then they hear a loud crash.
The howl has stopped.
Roh and Kokutei forcibly went right into a rock and are now stuck inside it. Splitting Headache!
Karuma and the others are still wondering what they just experienced and go to investigate. Stupid Me! 
Goura and a Hyouijuu are ordered to break the rock.
Goura lifts it with his magic while the Hyouijuu forcefully punches the rock.
They succeed in breaking it and the badly wounded and unconscious Roh and Kokutei fall out. I think I've fainted. I think I've fainted. 
Karuma orders Guren and Anju to capture them.
After that, Guren and Anju teleport back to the base with the prisoners in tow.

Karuma lets out a horrible laugh, but suddenly goes silent.EVIL Laughter! 
What on earth could have enough power to completely annihilate a Dog Deity Prince and his pet? Nuu 
Could it have been Zenki and Goki? Karuma sweats, shudders and passes out. I think I've fainted. 

Goura makes funny faces, now seeing his chance to take out Karuma, but before he can do anything, Guren comes back and tells him to guard the prisoners instead. Hmm. Evil plotting in progress. Hi! 
Goura clenches his fists, grumbles and leaves, while Guren takes Karuma and carefully carries her to safety. I am PISSED OFF!I love the earth + Earth Hour 

This was originally started as a roleplay on Kishin Douji Zenki Wikia, but as it stands now, I'll make this into it's own story.
The original version from the roleplay only goes as far as "Suddenly..." from the first Chapter, while the rest is entirely new.

Title: A Visit from outer Space
Author: ZTheGS (alias Semerone)

Date (started): 2016-05-01
Date (finished): 2016-06-16

This fan fic also features a female Guardian Spirit called "Red".
She is an OC of mine and I might add some drawings of her sooner or later.
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FreddyBonnie214 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2016
If you don't know already, I'm Freddy from the wiki!
anyways, nice fanfic!:) (Smile) :D (Big Grin) 
I really enjoyed it, especially the first part Clap 
I am looking forward to see other Fanfics by you;) (Wink) Hug 
ZTheGS Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi, Freddy! Hug 

I'm glad you enjoyed reading my fanfic. :happybounce: 

I made some other fan fics, but most of these are still under construction.

Probably you know my (finished) fanfic Zenki the Nightguard. (or not) :D (Big Grin) 
I featured it on the wiki before updating it a little bit and uploading it here.

The other fanfics I'm working on are the following:

- A Visit from outer Space (uncensored version)
-- This one is a slightly altered and less tame version of this fanfic.
- How to train your Guardian Spirit
-- This one is a humorous Kishin Douji Zenki related fanfic mixing real life with fiction.
- The Dawn of Creation
-- This was completely made by me and is a science fiction story.

There are also comics and some short stories which I made:

- Tasty Kokutei
-- This one is a four pages long comic set after "A Vist from outer Space".
- Short Stories
-- These are (very) short stories with open endings related to different genres, currently these mostly Kishin Douji Zenki fanfics.

Feel free to read any of these in any order you want. :D (Big Grin) 
ZTheGS Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
For some reason I can't edit this fan fic's description anymore. Waaaah! 

Whenever I try to edit the description, DeviantArt only allows me to put this fan fic into my journal but doesn't allow me to keep it in Literature / Fan Fiction / General Fiction.

I don't know what causes this. I encountered the same problem when I wanted to write about my OCs and Original Species, which were meant to be deviations to be put in folders and not as journals. Nuu 

Does anyone know how to fix this issue? Confused 
Please help me, if you know how to fix this.
ZTheGS Featured By Owner Edited Jun 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I found a workaround.
If I take the text away and for example replace it with "test", I can save it and edit the description.:D (Big Grin) 
After this, I can add my text again and the description is now updated.

The only problem is that if the computer crashes, everything is gone.Waaaah!
But I make regular backups of my fan fics, so this isn't too bad.

Although my workaround doesn't seem to work if something already is in the journals category. No, I disagree! 
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