First try and computer inking??? LIAR!! Lol, this is looks excelent for your first one! Man after a while of inking with the computer and mine don't look this good.
The shading is excelente, and the pose is different too in the battle stance, much more cooler then standing there smiling for the camera
. You'll get better at action poses as times goes on, everyone does
Such awsome detail as always. And your shiny things are the best! That sword rocks!