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App checks are open till August 9th, comment via front page ! Remember we are just check


Guidelines


Disclaimer : Please be warned that because this is a semi-dark themed group that involves the killing of a blood relative, there maybe mention of child abuse, rape, and etc in character backstories. However there will be no actual rping of those situations going on in the group or in the main story line. If you wish there to be a mention of rape or etc in your history please do not make it graphic by giving a descriptive narrative of it.

Zero: Application Sheet by Faiell [ D e v i c e ]◇  ◇  D e v i c e

click on above device thumbnail for the template and more info on the device .
• your character carries this around everywhere.
• keeps track of their Stats , EXP, and Level.
• device cannot be destroyed and cannot be lost, if 'lost' it will always appear back to you mysteriously.
Why do you use it for? • Keeping track of your current level, lives and your stats. As well as your current relationships / contacts. ( can see the stats of any of their contacts by viewing profile )
• recieve notifications from the World through here as well as keep in contact with others; can send messages but not call, picture messages can be sent also. Messages can be sent while in game to people outside not participating in the game. Short videos can also be sent but if a normal human was to view it they will not see any sign of things that can lead to them finding out about World 00



Character Pointers




fill out this information onto the artist comment of your app. It's also a good idea to put a link to your device somewhere in artist comments ( maybe at the top ) for easier access.

    Name : does not have to have a last name D.O.B : just month and day, not year. will play a factor later on. Age : must at least be 13, the oldest is 30. Gender : only male OR female, please no 'mystery' ?? here. Height : Occupation : student? part-time worker at a shop? Zone : what zone are they currently living in? ( does not have to be the same zone they were born in, if its different from the zone they were born in mention it in their history ) Demonic Weapon :
      Yes you do need to have a picture of the weapon somewhere on the app. ( or if you prefer to make a sep pic for it put the link here for view )  remember to say if its magical or parasite and give a small description of it to describe how it's used. ( if magical describe what element it uses ; ex: a fan that can 'throw' fireballs ) ( if parasite describes what makes it 'animated' -or if it morphs - remember it cannot morph into 230492834 forms. if its focused on something like a gun changing form it can have only up to 3 forms. if its a scarf that has hands that grow, it can grow to any size then -but has a limit - ) No weapon should be able to summon a monster  or etc that will fight for them ( or has a mind of its own ) .
    Personality :
      Remember to include negative as well as positive traits. They are human. Just because they killed someone doesn't mean that they have to be 'unstable, psychotic , very emotional' and etc. They CAN have those moments where they are overwhelmed with remembering their crime, but mostly we want everyone to have relatively normal/diverse personalities and not everyone being the sterotype 'killer' kind. Zero Form Personality Difference : Yes your character can develop a different personality in their Zero form ( different traits appearing / acting differently while still remaining the same person ) but it is encourage to develop this part via through RPs. It is fine to make some notes down about the difference but overall we would like you to be open about this and rely on character development to shape a personality change if they were to have one in their Zero form versus their normal form. You might want to also add in reasons for why they act differently in their Zero form.
    History :
      MUST include:
        who they killed / how they killed them / how they covered -escaped after killing / and reasoning to why the committed the murder. Please do not just say 'he hated his father, so he took a knife and stabbed him in the heart one day at dinner time. Murder can have as simple of a reason as that, however we want you to 'explain' more about it and not just sum it up in one or two sentences. Include their past , (ex: how did they grow up , who is their family, what zone are they from, etc etc ) any important things about their history that affected why the committed the murder, please include ! History should not include into participating in the World yet. It can go up to receiving the device and their eyes changing but not actually participating in a game yet.
      min of 200 words. Just to make sure people aren't only writing a few sentences of their history. We do want people to grow as the group goes on but they need to have a back story too that tells us why they are how they are.
    Likes & Dislikes : Etc :

    FAQ

    Will my character know that they are a 'Zero' ?
      Yes, by reading the information blogs found in their device they will find out they are a Zero ( the name given to Players in the game ) however they will not know that all the Players have something in common ( murdering a blood relative ) but may find out by talking to Keepers, or from other Players who may have figured it out.
    Why are they called Zeros ?
      Name given to them by the World, it plays on the term since the other zones are named 1 - 4, because these group of players are 'murders' they are labeled as 'outcasts' by being '0' and do not rightfully belong anywhere. When the World began it caused the eyes of all the Zeros to change and the devices appeared next to them.
    Zeros are criminals ?
      Being a Zero means that you have committed the great crime of murder, more specifically that of someone who shared the same blood. ( can be more then one person killed, yes half siblings or cousins do count. ) Your character did not have to specifically have known the person they killed was blood related to them ( may have been by chance ) it could have been intentionally or unintentional killing. ( Mother dying by giving birth does not count, but something like driving while drunk with sibling in the car and getting them killed does  - getting hit by drunk driver instead doesn't count because it wasn't the 'fault' of the person to get hit by the drunk driver - ) For the purpose of this group your character must not have been arrested or sent to jail for committing the murder and must still be living somewhere in the city. Or if they were arrested ( maybe for being suspect) they need to be out of custody by this present time. The murder does not have to be recent, it could have occurred a few years ago. Also 'poisoning' someone does count. ( as long as the victim dies before the World starts )
    Clothes ?
      Normal world is in present day time, so any kinds of fashion that you may see today can be used. Their Zero form doesn't have to be present day and can be fantasy like with armor and etc or modern.
    Zero Form ?
      They should have some sort of demonic feature to them ( or some difference in their normal appearance ) . Must be the same gender and same body type of their normal form. Yes you can make some altercations to the body type but we do not want anything extreme ( ex: a really muscular tall person having a short, small zero form ) Everything else can be changed. Hair and eye colors as well as hairstyle, etc. They do not have a say in how their Zero form appears, but it does have to do with a mix of their soul / ideals. Zero pupil is always visible while they are in this form. They have the same 'physical' enhanced strengths ( physical strength , jumping far, running fast, enhanced settings ) but do not have their own magic. The enhanced abilities are reasonable and by no means 'super powers'. Their weapon is the main focus to make up for their weaknesses and give them ways to attack. Zero's still look mostly 'humanoid' they can wear masks and etc though.
    Disabilities healed ?
      As long as they still have that body part, the body part will be restored to normal health. Example would be if they injured their leg and can no longer run, it will  be healed. But if they lost the leg then it will not be regrown. If they are blind, they can regain their sight, if they cannot hear they will gain hearing. As long as they still have the body part that is 'defected' it will be restored to normal health.
    Zero Pupil ?
      It looks like This. ( 0 color doesn't have to be black, can be any color you wish. Remember it is the 0 with the diagonal slash through it ) Does not have to be always drawn on their 'normal' appearance since humans see their eyes as normal anyways. But when in their Zero form they must always be visible if their eyes are shown. So yes they can be wearing a mask but once it's off they will have the zero eyes. Contacts cannot hide the 0 pupil although the 0 part may be a different color if wearing a different eye color contact.
    Demonic Features ?
      Examples are horns, tails, wings, fangs, etc. Yes having 'ears' such as cat ears or animal features are allowed but they must be 'demon-ish' so not all just cutesy fluffy moe-ness. If you want cat ears and a tail, maybe add on horns or demon-like wings? Or make the colors of their ears and tail demon-ish in looks. Yes feather like wings are also allowed. Yes elf-like ears are allowed. Remember they must be mostly human in appearance so no full animal faces / full animal bodies. But remember having animal / special features does not give you the actual animal's special abilities. ( having animal ears can make you a little more sensitive but not super hearing; yes you can use wings to fly. )
    Demonic Weapon ?
      When they enter World 00 they gain some kind of Demonic Weapon. The weapon could be directly attached to their body or an actual weapon. No Zero can use another's weapon, only the Zero can use their own. If another Zero tries to use the weapon, it is 'ordinary' and cannot access it's powers. Other weapons can range from your own design to already made weapons like scythes, guns, chainsaws. Please be creative in its design ! Your character can only have one weapon. ( if it is duel swords or guns, that is allowed. But if something like a chainsaw, you only get one ) When pulled into the game the Zeros will already have their demonic weapons on them. Only parasite weapons can morph or change into different forms. Having a long pole that can split into something like nun chucks is alright.
    Demonic Weapon Type ?
      Only parasite or magical types. If their weapon is 'magical' while they themselves are not, only the weapon is.  ( ex: if the demonic weapon could be encased in a element such as fire to use to fight, but the Zero cannot shoot fireballs out of their bare hand. The weapon has to be the one to use it directly ) This affects which stat you should focus on increasing. ( physical or magical attk ). Either the weapon is magical ( uses an element to fight with, not summoning monsters or etc to fight for them ) or it is parasite ( animated somehow ).
    Parasite?
      Parasite are a 'physical' type of weapon and can morph, they do not use an element. ( ex: a scarf that can grow into two large arms to fight with ; claw like arms that can extend ; a snake whip that can move on its own, sword that can change in size, a gun that can change forms -limit it to only 3 forms each - ; hair that can turn sharp ) or an item that can transform into your weapon. Your weapon does not have to morph if you do not want it to. ( Morphing includes any type of animation, ex : would be there being a giant hammer that can grow in length or spikes on a weapon that move ) However the weapon becomes inanimate once you let go of it, you must be touching it to use its powers. ( exceptions to this is like the following ; knives, boomerang like weapons , those will keep animated when they are thrown and will come back to you ) Parasite needs to have a good set of limitations / restrictions / weaknesses if it has different forms. Think of it as the more forms it has = the more it's power is split up into each form. So the more forms we see a weapon have the more we expect there to be more weaknesses / restrictions / limitations for each form.
    Magical?
      Magical Weapons use a magical element to fight with. ( ex: flaming gloves or gloves that can turn into stone , ice sword that can 'freeze' parts that it touches, fans that can throw water ) If you let go of your weapon ( if magical ) it will revert back to normal. ( ex: a sword engulfed in flames will turn back into a regular sword when dropped ; staff that can throw fireballs, fireballs will poof if staff is dropped )Magical weapons are inanimate. If the weapon is used without the element it is still considered 'magical damage'. It may not make sense logically but that is how the group is set up. Magical's should not be changing weapon form since it uses a element to fight. The element however can change different shapes in how it attacks from the weapon.
    Parasite versus Magical Type?
      Parasite Types cause more damage if DEF is low, Magical Types cause more damage if MDEF is low. Parasite uses ATTK to increase power and Magical uses WIS to increase magical power. Other then that they are pretty equal in power. Even though Magical Weapon is still a 'weapon' it does not deal physical damage. This is to keep it fair between the two types. Or else magical = physical AND magical damage and parasite would only be physical, we do not want that so we are limiting it to either magical or physical only.  
    Occupation ?
      Yes your character needs to have an occupation, after all they have to make a living or do something with the rest of their lives. Do they work part time at a shop? Do they attend school? You can include more info about their occupation / why they are doing that job in the history. Yes at the schools in Central there are dorms. Yes they can live in a different zone from where they have to travel for work. Teachers are allowed but be specific on what grade level they're teaching at. ( highschool, college..? )
    Can I make a new character ?
      Yes it is possible for your character to 'die' in this group and you'll have to re-apply to the group with a new character IF your character died because of inactivity. From inactivity is due to important missions costing 'lives' and when you run out of lives your character dies and you are kicked from the group. If you wanted to make a new character then you can create a new one without having to re-apply( your character will be labeled as 'dead' ). you must do the following... Then you must first submit either an RP log or a deviation about and explaining your character's death to the group to inform other members of their passing. Their name will then be crossed out from the ID # Log and you'll need to send a new note reserving a new ID #.


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marmalade-jam Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013  Student General Artist
I have a question about parasite weapons. 

I was thinking of having my character wield two small orbs, or spheres of black mass that allowed her to form multiple spears, currently a maximum of 4, and allowed her to control/levitate them via the spheres. Their max distance to still be usable from the spheres would be 4 meters(13 ft) before they will dissipate. She must keep constant physical contact with the spheres to control and sustain the spears. 

The drawback of this weapon is that it is terrible for close range combat due to the spears length getting in the way of the user. The user can summon more than one spear, but severely cuts down the accuracy and attack power with the size of the spear getting smaller the more that are summoned. Also the more spears that are summoned, the more of a physical toll it takes on the user, hence why 4 is the best the user can currently sustain.

So pretty much the success of this weapon depends on the users ability to keep the opponent within 5-13ft.
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
Sorry for the late reply ! 

Sorry but for the weapon since it is a parasite and morphs it would need to be the sphere that turns into the spears and not conjuring a spear from nothing. But if this were a magical weapon instead you would be able to conjure the spears / control them through your character holding the weapon if they were created from an element. ( ex: ice ) 

The other limitations / details / weaknesses that you have look good to go though.
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marmalade-jam Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student General Artist
No worries, I figured you guys were busy with the mini enrolment apps. But thanks for answering my question. 

Ok so If it were a magical weapon it would work? So like it were a set of two orbs with the element being shadows?
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013
yep that would work
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marmalade-jam Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student General Artist
Sweet! Thank You so much! :iconiloveyouplz:
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lealin Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
BIG QUESTION O_o

I got the idea for parasite weapon - My character in zero form have "crystal" body, If you touch it act like normal skin but if he is in battle skin are change to very hard/solid/tough. Color skin are blue and shinny...like crystal with white sparkle hair. He can change arms in to big crystal hands and smash (Crystal Hulk! ) legs are change to in to big crystal covered ...boots... an smash enemy. Second form are chain but not for fight just for hold down enemy. My character are perfect tank. Not big DMG but DEF and HP are huge. Close combat and unarmed combat. He hates distance fight type characters (and for this he got only chains tu get closer to him).  Its good type for character or i must change something? Sorry for my english in my conutry i got middlenight xD
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013
hello ! it is acceptable to have the crystal form as their parasite weapon but since there is a big difference between having his body as being his parasite weapon and a chain that he wields separately we would ask for you to pick either one or the other. so either to have a weapon that is their body type OR to have a weapon that they actually wield. 
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lealin Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks fo answer! Ok i choose a body type as weapon. Not normal weapon only his skills and crystal skin. Its ok now? : ) perfect tank in battle xD
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
yep that is ok c: 
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HonoIkazuchi Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Does that mean no twins?
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
if you and your friend each make one of the twins that is fine, you cannot however make twins ( 2 characters ) for yourself.
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HonoIkazuchi Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I NEED A FRIEND UGH. Thank you very much!
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suteraretaneko Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
Twins are allowed but they'd have to be split between two people :>
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HonoIkazuchi Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh. I see. Thank you!
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DokiDokiSuki108 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
I've updated my app! C:
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DokiDokiSuki108 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Um I was thinking can I use a picture from google as the base for the weapon? Because I think if I try to draw it it'll be too late...
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
if you mean using the google image as the link to the weapon that is fine as long as you remember to credit somewhere next to the link that you did not draw it / it is from google <3
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DokiDokiSuki108 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Okay thank you so much! Sorry I forgot to add the images for the weapon for a long time! DX
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
I need to clearly list 3 weakness and 3 strength??
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
yes it should have around that amount, as long as there is a balance with the strength and weaknesses of the weapon that is fine.
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
The strength and weaknesses of the char is also counted right? For example what i told u before, he will be less flexible, tired and pain when the claws r longer, something like that, is it okay?
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
yes those count as weaknesses since they are a drawback for using his weapon.
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
Thank you very much!//rushing the app....
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LawDraw Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When you apply to the group do you need to have your device already made or do you do that later?
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
you can do the device later <3
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LawDraw Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh thats good cause I was panicing for a second there. Thanks :)
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
Our characters don't need to have different personalities in the normal and zero form right? They can share the same personality?
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013
yes they can have the same personality
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Thank you~~
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Panda-Virus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Question - for magical weapons that control an element, what would be the element types? would they be the four most common elements (earth, fire, water, air) or would it be allowable for a weapon to control something such as electrcity?
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
You can use common elements or more specified ones like ice, poison or blood. Yes that would be fine as long as you remember to add weaknesses / limitations to using that power.
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Panda-Virus Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
alright, thank you~!
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XErrORX666 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist
i missed the app check but i have one question before trying it anyway, my characters weapon is, well, kinda two little floating fellows who one can turn into an offensive weapon and one into a shield, is that allowed, cuz it said only one weapon and i wasnt sure if a shield really is a weapon type of a tool.
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
please pick between one or the other. the one weapon you use ( ex : if you pick shield ) you can also use for offense if you wish to.
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XErrORX666 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist
okay, and if it needs both to turn into one weapon??
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
yes if it is one weapon it is allowed to be able to turn into a shield or offensive weapon
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XErrORX666 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist
ok i hope everything is fine now im trying it
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Another question, if my character is still not yet 18 years old, he killed someone and was sent to the youth detention center, for like how many years? Any logical number? And after he was released from the place, he continued his life and it was then, the zero pupil appeared so as the device, is that ok?
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
yes as long as it is a realistic amount of years that is fine. ( for how long he stayed at the center for )
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Erm....maybe 2 years? And when he came out, he continued his life normally and one day, he found out the zero eyes and the device.
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
sorry but we are leaving it up to your best judgement since the realistic part of the app is not something that we are checking for you and you will have to research on your own if you are unsure. if you believe 2 years for your character's stay in the center is enough time / works best with your history then go with that
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Ok, thank you very much~~
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
He uses a pair of “cat-like” gloves which have sharp claws which was very strong. It is capable of cutting off a lot of things. It is a parasite weapon which the claws can grow very long up to 10 meters. (But it will be quite troublesome to control and so usually he prefers using shorter lengths, example 1 to 2 meter.) He moves flexibly, amazing jumping skills, hiding skills and well control of his weapon makes him a good fighter for close distance. Long distance requires longer claws for him to get the target and he will be less flexible in attacking so he usually chooses short distance targets.

This is my the weapon concept for my character, is it ok?
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
We would like to see more weaknesses / limitations added since it is both a long distance & close combat weapon. ( and also since it is mentioned it is both very sharp / very strong sounds too overpowered atm. )
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
When his claws are too long, he is not flexible, so usually he won't use that. He is more to the closer combat. And yeah, it is very sharp and strong, do u have any suggestions? Thank you very much.
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
sorry but i can't give you a list of suggestions, i can only help you with what you have so far and give some pointers. the very sharp & very strong seems like too much on top of that his physical abilities already makes him seem too OP. ( also should mention in the history how he was able to have all/gain those physical abilities ) you should consider either taking one or a few of those things out or adding more weaknesses to him.the claws not being flexible doesn't seem as enough of a weakness for his weapon, maybe add in limitations to how often he can extend the claws or etc, something along those lines.
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
He uses a pair of “cat-like” gloves which have sharp claws which was very strong. It is capable of cutting off various things. It is a parasite weapon which the claws can grow very long up to 10 meters. (But it will be quite troublesome to control and so usually he prefers using shorter lengths, example 1 to 2 meter.) In his zero form, he moves flexibly, amazing jumping skills, hiding skills and well control of his weapon makes him a good fighter for close distance. The longer he extend his claws, it more tired he gets. Longer claws actually 'eats up' his stamina and he will feel the pain on his fingertips up to his arms when the length of the claws reach 3 meters and above. The longer it gets, the more pain he felt. And Long distance requires longer claws for him to get the target and he will be less comfortable and less flexible in attacking so he usually chooses short distance targets.
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Anddd, he gets his physical abilities because in his past, in real life, he did learn some self defense skills(his family was once rich and then became poor, will explain in detail in his history), then his father became a gambler and abuse him and his mother a lot. His father causes trouble outside and sometimes there are enemies coming to their houses, finding troubles. He is good at hiding and protect his mom. He need to work part time to earn money too. So, his stamina is somehow good(not EXTREMELY GOOD) And, he didn't have any friends except for the stray cats he fed. So he sometimes he resembles a cat as how he acts. Thats why he had those abilities in his zero form.

Sorry it is so long to read, sorry for the trouble. Is it ok?
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013

10 meters seems a bit too long and i'm not sure how the character would be able to swing or move it. ( maybe shorten it to a max of somewhere around 3ft or reasonable amount that the character is able to carry while keeping his own balance since metal / material the claws is made out of can be rather heavy since it is on his fists and he isn't gripping it like a sword for better balance )

by his cat interaction you mean that because he became friends with the cats he gained the ability to be more flexible with the amazing jumping skills? or are you talking personality wise he has the same behavior as cats do and not on physical abilities?

zero form does not give them enhanced or abilities they did not previously have, the weapon is there to make up for it. if they didn't have amazing jumping skills in the real world he will not gain them in his zero form.
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Junshiro Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
then i will change the max to 3 meters? and he usually use 1 meter and below. And he will feel the pain starting from 1.5 meters the pain increase until it reached the max? still, the longer it gets, it eats up his stamina.

Oh, he acts a bit like a cat, soft feelings. And physical abilities wise, it also slightly influenced by the cats and the reasons i stated just now(learned self defense skills before, hiding from bad guys)

But zero form makes them stronger right? there is no way the zero form physical abilities is exactly the same as in the real world, right? well, example, my char do have those physical abilities in the real world but then it actually enhanced by a bit in his zero form. Isn't that ok? Btw, he had dark looking ears and tails in his zero form and that also makes it more logical for him to have the physical ability.

Since i think my char's weapon was restricted by a lot so isn't it ok for him to have better physical abilities?

Again, sorry for the trouble, i ask a lot.
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akiicchi Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
3 meters is about almost 9 feet and seems too long still imo because it doesn't seem practical to me when having to use something that extends that far in a battle especially when they also have to keep in mind to strike opponents with the sharp ends of it while trying to keep balance in mind when swinging them around to try and attack with the tips.( assuming that by claw like blades it isn't sharp on the 'side' of the blades but only at the tips of it so he'll have to constantly move those long blades to be able to strike someone at the right angle at the tips to deal damage) but this is just my opinion on the weapon so if you still wish to go with what you have now you are free to do so since some of the other mods may not have the same opinion as me when it comes to the final app discussions.

the pain part and eating stamina are good weaknesses that you added.

sorry about that i was confused by your wording ; u ; yes normal enhanced abilities is enhanced but shouldn't be like a super powered ability. for zero form you do not need to make a list of enhanced abilities and is assumed that all their physical abilities is enhanced by default when they are in zero form. You only need to list the weapon's abilities / weaknesses.
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