I absolutely love this <3
You gave Mayl a very adorable smile and I love Lan's body language when being held because he's not used to it xD
She has the look like she's excited to share & show him off.
I really love the right hand resting pose that you gave Mayl that's resting on her right forearm. It might not seem like much, but hands are a pain to draw and it stands out to me to add to the cuteness of this character. *faves*