Shop Forum More Submit  Join Login
Bury yourself in the wobble
Of my hips, honey, smother yourself
In my thighs. It's desire's got you panting
Like the hot afternoon and I'm just the moon
To bring you down. Take off your crown.
It's just us here now. Bury yourself
In my sighs.

                   And when the river opens
                   Take your boat down to the coast
                   And be my most, my many. Be a penny
                   Sailing down from the Empire State Building
                   To its happy destination. Be a sensation,
                   not a thought. A taut wave in space.
                   The boat nudges into the sea--

And the moon is out in the daytime.
And the ocean is out inside me.
A sexy little poem to make up for what I've missed.
Add a Comment:
 

Daily Deviation

Given 2018-11-08
An Expression Of Grace by zebrazebrazebra ( Suggested by neurotype and Featured by BlackBowfin )

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconjessamar:
JessaMar Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
This is tantalizing and sultry.
Reply
:iconjohnthesavage8:
johnthesavage8 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2018
A bit late but I wanted to say that I really like this one! I like the irregularity of the rhymes and the echo of "thighs" in "sighs" and the way the poem seems to overflow itself in the second stanza. In fact, my only quibble is with the period in the next-to-last line; might it flow better as a comma?
Reply
:iconchampionx91:
Championx91 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2018
Reply
:icontinselfire:
Tinselfire Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2018   General Artist
That's... sensual. Yes, very much so.
Reply
:iconbeeswingblue:
beeswingblue Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2018   Writer
Congrats on the DD; I love this one. :heart:
Reply
:iconlindartz:
LindArtz Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sounds like a Maya Angelou poem! :iconclapplz:!!!   Most excellent!


Congratulations on your much deserved DD!  :)

For My Personal Use DO NOT USE!!! by LindArtz


Reply
:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
~sexual heeeaaaaallliiiiiiing~
Reply
:iconzebrazebrazebra:
zebrazebrazebra Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2018   Writer
Oh, you.
Reply
:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Edited Oct 20, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
:eyes:
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×

:iconzebrazebrazebra: More from zebrazebrazebra


Featured in Collections

Written Work by catiescarlett

DDs by DevNews

Great Writings from Other Deviants by LindArtz


More from DeviantArt



Details

Submitted on
October 19, 2018
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
1,011
Favourites
37 (who?)
Comments
9