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Origional CatCom's Layout by zamir Origional CatCom's Layout by zamir
Catcom still not in its Final Form. Just uploading for more suggestions. Today i could just make its navbars and upper blue gradient bar. I expermented a lot here on the site. But what i say. Simplicity main jo bat hai..wo bussy main nahi.....I erased all graphics i had checked on this. But still i dont think i am doing some mistake. Please point that out my good friends.
HERE IS THE HTML VERSIO OF SAME DESIGN.. [link] ANY SUGGESTIONS ABOUT MOUSE OVERS.
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:iconmuted-pain:
muted-pain Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2005
u did this?!
i like it :D
very simple & neat ^_^
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2005
Hello Muted pain sahib..THanks for liking this ..
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2005
THanks dost...BOhat bohat shukriya for liking.....
btw i like your signature...
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abart Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2005
neat hay ...fit hay :thumbsup:
i found [link] better than index page :!:
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illuxon Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
hey zamir. i'm honored that u want my comments on ur work. i'm not much a person good with layouts and stuff so i dont really thin i'll be able to give constructuve critism. anyways i'll just tellu what i think abt this. the layout looks good. its a little too clean for my liking. probably too much negative space. the color scheme is good but i wud like the inclusion of one other color, probably an orange or a black. anyways this is my two cents. hope it helps
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
Yes ..i listened this comment majorly.....so i will be working on this critisim .to make OK i wil place an image in balnk area. thansk for the comments btw
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:iconshabzden:
ShabzDen Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2005
nice & simple...:)
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:iconomer-tariq:
omer-tariq Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005
now this is much better. excellent improvements :thumbsup:
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
Thanks bhai. abhi yeh graphics add kyayin hain is main..let me know what you think about em.
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Can i know yar.which one looks the cool.
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:iconomer-tariq:
omer-tariq Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
only the first link is working
so i can only tell you about the first one :)
I think its almost perfect
the only problem that i see is with the font in the body. change the services, contact, tariff font in the body part and the gradient on the navigation becomes white too soon so the tariffs merges in the back just fix these two things and its perfect.
i would love to see the other links try uploading them on another server or you can mail them to me :)
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knOwme Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
hi there zamir ...

well my friend as you have asked me to give my suggestuions to you on this piece, umm,

first of all i think as faizan and LessOrdinary about the girl image, that it should be removed, buddy they are right, to make it look nice and good, yu got to remove that image from top,

secondly the arrows on left top, man if yu placed those arrows on right top then you should remove them from left corner ...

about the sattelite ... the placement is ok but the shadow behind it, reduce it a lil bit sattelite ...

hmmm thats all i can say at the moment ... i'll try to give more suggestions if required ...

wish yu best of luck ...
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:iconlessordinary:
LessOrdinary Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
First of all :) I am going to criticise only because u have asked me to. You might not like all my ideas. coz everyone has his own way with things.

I love the two colors, blue and green. Perfect choice. However, if i had to change a design a bit, i would get rid of the girls image. and move the sattelite image down left and get rid of the massive dropshadow under it.

I'm personally not a big fan of faded corners.. so mine would have to be crisp along the navigation and the top.
Dropshadows under page titles on this page wud b a big no no to me. unless the distance is kept 1, and spread and size 0.

The moving arrows are a good idea thumbsup for it.

goodluck with ur work. :thumbsup:
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
Blue or green to thek hai..but i can,t go out from the color schemes as its the client recomended OK? ladki bhi erase ho gayi udher se. or sattilite bhi khatam. I wanted now about some fancy flash some where.....Please any suggestion ...i mean where to put flash.
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:iconlessordinary:
LessOrdinary Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
I said I liked the colors. they're fine. so wats the point changing them? :confused:
If I have to add flash to a page, I would design it in a way that the flash movie is a part of the design. as in make a box in the design. not put it in later on.
coz in that way it wont leave any smart place for it.. dont u think?
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
I want to see any of your design you placed flash in....yes i agree with you and always do like that..
can you see on [link] [link] [link]
you seen flash there used......I always use flash like this.. So i am waiting for your anywebsite you implemented with flash and html.
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:iconlessordinary:
LessOrdinary Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
I dont do flash website. I dont find flying ufos attractive on a website :s Just a personal choice.
On the other hand people who want to have their websites done love flash. Anyway, there's plenty of websites working in both flash and html online. I'm sure u must've seen quite a few already. Good Luck with ur work.
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
OK.thanks....Convey my Slamz to Raza...sahib.
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:iconlessordinary:
LessOrdinary Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
I dont do flash website. I dont find flying ufos attractive on a website :s Just a personal choice.
On the other hand people who want to have their websites done love flash. Anyway, there's plenty of websites working in both flash and html online. I'm sure u must've seen quite a few already. Good Luck with ur work.
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005
well i wanted to ask a very important question...From where you get ideaz?
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:iconlessordinary:
LessOrdinary Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2005
Stock Images, Magazines, Interiors, Album covers, Clothes, Shoes, Websites, and wat not =P
I mean its the same for everyone. init?
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2005
I c...can i know any free stock images site...which provide standard images with good quality and with no money.
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degothicangel Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
Love the lay out , but I wont really mind taking that pic of girl out . And a little personal touch I mean yaar this thing is gettin common you need to add your personal touch a may be little fade in in the top bar or who knows a lil flash :)
I love the colour combination and the smooth lay out :)
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zamir Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
Hello bhai..thanks for the appreciation . abhi thorda sans to laynay do.abhi daltay hian flash wlash bhi is main..lols..thanks anyway for the nice words..
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majidsaeed Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
wow zamir ... your work is getting simply best ..
i am impressed by your skills dude.. cheetay ho sir jee aap Adobe key.. i like the mouse over effects and the color scheme..
and so many people have guided you to the right way, i cant dare to point out anything after that!

im looking forward for the final look of catcom..!

Best of luck!
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zamir Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
Thanks Majid Bhai...Bohat Bohat shukriya. eBay wala letter bhi gore se parh layna zara...Please Bohat zarori hai wo.
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faizan Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
this is better then previous submission.
few things..
-remove the picture of girl talking on phone.
-remove those arrows on right and left.
-the height of green bar should be reduced half of this.
-not sure about this lime green color. play with light blues i guess.
-the main logo on title bar of Catcom should be placed lil bit down.. right now its pretty much flying and focusing out.
-illustrations, pictures, pictures of people talking on phone etc etc can be placed on white part as watermark on right hand side. there much space there utilise that part as for illustrations with text.
-is that the part of logo that lime green underline thingi? thats not good man. there are two green lines and pretty much looking like mixing and my brain says lines and again lines. if the line in logo is removed the text can be lowered down and will look quite pleasing maybe.
-the horizontal rule of link and vertical both are perfect.
-whereas vertically that gradient goes well. about horizontal gradient on link's place you should stretch that light blue color till the end of tariff.
-dont use drop shadow thingi like that here.
-it will be a wise decision if you get this web as graphical title bar. a simple easy goin illustration on title bar that blue part where you will place logo. any abstract artwork expressing a simple concept of communication. its not neccessary to tell people that "i am using a phone for communication." think beyond. think of satellite and of space . a decent way of expression. an art form.
-placing of satellite .. hm this picture is related to title bar..
-zamir i am really sorry abt this logo thingi. the person who designed this should have realised that this will be printed and used in many areas. though i liked the font to some extend. but that design is going way out of all. just think for a second and ask yourself. is this looking alright about the logo. will it go with the placing and all that stuff. is this looking well balanced? to me it looks like its moving out of its place and text is forcefully placed.
-hmm lemme think something quick.. .. may be square will helpout. but not this !!!!
well no worries if this is finalised continue working on other part. i know they wont listen and this might be the final version but u can make ur creative move by reducing the size a little bit of over all logo including text make it smarter. i am not satisfied with the logo though i know its nothing to do with me and i should mind my business.
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graphicalx Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
i saw this design, im really sorry i didnt comment

i like the overall design

critique:
Add more faces with that woman's face up there on the left, two more faces will do. Why not have an old man talking, a grandfather to be exact ;)
Will the empty space on the top center have a banner? Because it will look a lot better when filled, when its not empty
please dont bevel the text inside

otherwise i like your color choice :)
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
Hi usama bhai....Thanks for the comments yar...I am thinking to add a machinry type graphic instead of peoples making fone call. what you say abt it?
have a look on html verion of same ....artwork
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graphicalx Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
the best way to know is by seeing if it looks good

you can judge that yourself if it looks good :)

good luck!
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
Thanks yar.....But i dont like whta i made i never get satisfy by it. May be i am passimist.
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:iconthoughtair:
thoughtair Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
hey, now this looks really nice. :) the colors as well. i guess - it had something to do with the layout bla bla. :)
just one more suggestion...the satellite - move it a bit downwards. otherwise...good job! :)
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
Thanks you very much sumaria...actualy its your idea so my scarp get in a new shape..thanks a bunch....yar
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:iconcosmy:
cosmy Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
NIce, SleeK design!!:D
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
Hey thanks friend..here check out the html version of same site...
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:iconcosmy:
cosmy Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
Consciouse Is The Soft Whisper of GOD in Man--
well said!!
and Conscience is wat hurts wen all ur other parts feel so good

hey-where's the link:?
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:iconzamir:
zamir Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2005
yar you put me in a problem. I want to talk to you for something. HTML version of this site is [link]
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:iconcosmy:
cosmy Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
hey wat kinda prob ? u can discuss it with me
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zamir Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2005
ap yeh batao..kay conscious and conceiounce main kya farak hai..as you had made a comment on my work i am still thinking may be i could not understood and thought may be there is some problem with my spellings ....and btw i tottaly dont understand what you were mean by..that body feel hurt when conscione feel cool or what ever you said.....i some time come online on photoshoplover@yahoo.com
OK?
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