Harry was becoming downright cocky as the story progressed. I admit that I was bloody frustrated by his angst in the 5th book then came 6th book it didn't get any better somewhat. Severus was right somehow, Harry did inherit some of James' arrogance, which was inevitably worsened by Severus' poor treatment to him of course.
Regardless, you portrayed the scene very well. Exactly what I had in my head when I first read it back then. I was like "Seriously Harry, you idiot child, provoking him when you should knw better!"