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Smile for me-Final chapter
*I would like to thank you all for reading this! And thanks to my Friend who helped me come up with all this wonderful ideas! Love you all!!
**Prussia and Norway doesn't belong to me
***You know belong to Norway.
****excuse the spelling and grammar.
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"H-hold on, what?" I panicked,  my heart leaped up to my throat.

But there wasn't a response. Instead, Norway pulled my face closer to his. Our lips only inches apart, I could feel his warm, mint smelling, breath as he studied my reaction. But before they touched, I pushed back wiggling out of his hold and half away across the room.

"No...no no no no no." I was mostly talking to myself and how much I wanted him to. "Don't play with me."

"Play with you?" Confusing coated his usual flat toned voice. "What do you mean, play?"

"I mean, don't mess with my emotions. I'm not some doll that you can kiss on and not feel anything, then when your done throw me away. I won't be a booty call!"

"Do you really think I would do that?" His eyes filling with irritation. "I'm not that low. Are you that stupid to see that I want to be with you?"

He must have not wanted to say that, due to the fact that his face flushed and he covered his mouth. Everything in the room stopped, even snowy, who was chewing on a cookie, stopped to look at us. His tiny nose twitching this way and that. My heart began to beat faster as I registered what he said.

"Repeat that." i demanded with a small smile.

Narrowing his eyes, Norge shook his head, keeping his hand over his mouth. "Never."

"Come on Norge. I couldn't hear you, what did you say?"

"Nothing (name). Just drop it?" His blush deepened.

"Stop being a pansy, or I'll tell Prussia that you ate all his cookies and tell all your deepest darkest fears to Denmark."

Sighing, he dropped his hand and closed his eyes to take a deep breath. "Faroe told me a story." He glanced over at me, his blue eyes glittering with bravery. "About how she let something go and it was to late to bring it back. She missed her chance on truly being happy...and I don't want that happening to me. There is only one thing in this world...one person, that can make me happy."

Stepping closer to me, he closed the distance that separated us. I could feel the warmth that evaporated off of him wash over my skin. He raised his hand and placed it on my cheek, cupping it tenderly. My heart beat frantically in my chest, thumping in every direction. We were so close, our bodies were pressed so close together that I could feel his very heart beat. It made me swoon, like I was under a spell, but a lovely one.

"(name) it's you. You are the only one who makes me happy, who can  actually make me smile and not regret waking you every morning." His words teased my mouth, tempting me to just a little taste. "I love you (name). I love you with every fiber of my being."

I close my eyes, waiting for the touch of his lips against mine...and it's there. So soft and gentle against my own, making my head swoon. He leans back, but before I could open my eyes, his lips were on mine once more. My lips move with his in unfamiliar patterns, and my knees go weak. Norge wraps his arms around my waist, bringing me closer to his body. In response, I wrapped my arms around his neck deepening our kiss.

Finally breaking free from each other, both panting for breath. My heart had just exploded and fell to my feet in hot ash. He stroked my lower lip, eyes full of love and satisfaction. All I wanted was one thing at that moment, to make it all perfect.

"Lukas..." I ran my hands through his soft blond hair, making sure not to touch the floating curl. "May I ask my question now?"

"Anything you want." He nodded.

"Can...can you smile for me?"

It was such a simple question and request. It made him stop and think about it. Just like before, when i first met him, his beautiful but rare smile graced those appealing lips that I had claimed as mine. It brought a warmth in me that I had never known before. Something that I will treasure for all my existence. His smile was mine, he was mine, just like I was his. This just had to go on the Best Christmas ever list.

"I love you." I whispered, leaning against his chest.

"As I love you, (name)." Then he suddenly pulled away and went to the chair to rummage in his jacket pockets. Pulling out a small box, not that small, but still small enough to fit. "One more thing," Handing it to me, he again smiled. "Merry Christmas."
Inside, was a small soft (f/c) bunny plushie. "Aw, thank you L-" Then I remembered the cookies and Snowy. Looking back I groaned and stormed over and lifted the  now empty package of cookies. Crumbs covered the couch and rabbit. Glaring down at the monster and tsked. "You know, you're the one who's going to have to explain this to him." Smirking, I took Norges hand and lead him out. When the Prussian got home, we would be long gone. Back to the place where I belong.
This is the last...but I may come up with one about Prussia Vs. Snowy...my bunny can kick his ass >:3 Lol~!

But I would like to thank you beautiful people for favoriting and watching me! You're all the best!
I would also like to thank my best friend Crystal for helping me through some rough spots.
Last but not least, I would like to thank my rabbit snowy for being in the story...and for eating all Prussia's cookies.
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gigi912912 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015
i would read the story about Prussia vs. snowy.... i'm laughing just imagining Prussia losing a fight to a lovable, lazy bunny :)

love this story by the way XD
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PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this was so cute... reader is such a tsundere... hehehe
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD I'm glad you think so! And I actually did try hard to make her (or him....maybe i can't remember what i put as gender...I may have made it only female...who knows...) some what interesting in such ways.
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PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It was interesting. I know I enjoyed reading it! :)
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skyrimwolf11 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
*le faints from fangirling* (so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
OwO Thank you~
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skyrimwolf11 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
RAWR, i just love these stories
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RavAndCheese Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
:iconexcitedblushplz: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEE !!!!! IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM GOING TO DIEEEEEEEEEEE
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:o oh golly don't die!!!
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RavAndCheese Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Well actually, I literally fainted in my fangirl state sooooo... :iconexcitedblushplz: WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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ponygurl433 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
D'AWWWWWWWW :iconexcitedblushplz: so CUTE!
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~~~~~~ sorry for the late thanks..... :3
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ponygurl433 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
lol no worries ^_^
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stupidbread Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
So basically we ate Prussia's cookies and left XD
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah......actually Snowy at the cookies....but yeah.
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themedicalninjagirl Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol dat face
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animechick7 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hmmm team pru or snowy
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It is a hard choice. -_-
Snowy would love the attention though, ;) he is a very loveable bunny....so he thinks more like a dog to me.
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animechick7 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012
hmmm so team snowy now
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You were always on his team....you just never knew it
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animechick7 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012
your so right
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, of course. He's a very convincing bunny o.o
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animechick7 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012
an very convincing albino bunny XD
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes yes he is
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76Patty Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
nosebleedplz OMG!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! KYAHAHAHA~!!!! :3
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☐ Taken

☐ Single

√ Mentally married to Denmark in Hetalia
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skyrimwolf11 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
same but Lovino.......

I dont know why but Its just..RAWR
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TheBlueberryCat Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sehr gut!/Meget god!/Very good!

I loved this story sooooooo much!!
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!! :::)
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TheBlueberryCat Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D :squee:
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
Awww! That was soooooo cute
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!!!!
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner May 15, 2012
No problemo!!!!!!!!!
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HipsterPink Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sooo kawai~
Officialy the KAWAIest story I ever read <3
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Danke :3
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AwesomexImprover Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
very nice
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Zackyadvenger Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :3
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AwesomexImprover Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012
your welcome
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mizu07 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved this story so much! This is such a good ending too!!
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