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Seviper Vore #336 by ZackTheRiolu Seviper Vore #336 by ZackTheRiolu
Original size: 2600x1200.
Seviper: "Circle of life babe :P"


The first drawing seem not give so much interest, so let's try with this one..
To the left is the drawing completed and to the right the drawing freehand.

Please comment..
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Here I go....

Let's go with the Sketch... It's a nice start, looks like a normal sketch or practice, I've got not much to say about it, Looks nice...

Now with the final result, It looks very well, The design got better, the outlines are fixed and the struggle is very well improved, as well with the Endline's smoothness, the Shading looks light, But fits! Also the lightning it's very visible, which is a good thing.

But even though, It's nicely done, But again with the Impact (First days of Critique...) It's the same as before (For me) Because, I'm not into Seviper too much, But still, I can't lie that it's nicely done, The improvement can be something slow, But the result is always worth it!

Remember it's just my opinion...
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Reporterrr Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
is safe to say that your favorite snekmon is seviper?
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:iconzacktheriolu:
ZackTheRiolu Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2018
Mmmh? Why should not be safe?
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Reporterrr Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
good to know

hummm snakes and dinos....
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MonsterMMORPG Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2016
great
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:iconzacktheriolu:
ZackTheRiolu Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2016
Thank you ^^
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SentinelWinder Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Now i can see the asome improvement !!! Zack keep it up
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:iconzacktheriolu:
ZackTheRiolu Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015
Yeah.. until i have just to copy the head i guess  U.U   Seviper was maybe the easiest drawing i ever made
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SentinelWinder Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
you always get down for everything -_- chear up plz
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:iconzacktheriolu:
ZackTheRiolu Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015
I'm just realist and for now i don't see any improvements, the only thing i see is the interest cause was chosed seviper this time.
From some people i feel more dissappointed than sad
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SentinelWinder Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
:/ aaww zack
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battlestoriesfan Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Great job on it. I actually like how the bulges were made
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TechmasterSM4000 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
Seviper is sure enjoying whatever it has squirming inside.
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:iconbrais-the-armaldo:
I love Seviper face is very expressive :D
I also like the movement of the dam, is very well done and the color is very fantastic¡¡

but I especially like the face of Seviper
good work¡¡¡
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ZackTheRiolu Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
Thank you!! ^^
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Brais-the-armaldo Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
welcome Zacky¡¡
Seviper is my favorite pokemon snake and you did great
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BlahBlah8679 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This is really good, I like the Seviper's expression and how he's is looking at his belly, it shows he is very satisfied with whatever he caught, the bulge in his belly can be bigger I feel but I'll assume he ate someone small. I think you did great with this one, good job Zack. :)
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ZackTheRiolu Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
I appreciate your comment ^^ thanks
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BlahBlah8679 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. Keep up your awesome work. :)
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:iconiechy:
iechy Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
Bellissimo !
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ZackTheRiolu Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
Grazie! XD
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iechy Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
Prego : D
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GoldenSkarmory Featured By Owner Edited Apr 28, 2015  Student Writer
Lo trovo molto meglio del primo, le linee sono più lisce e i tratti della testa, delle zanne eccetera sono fatti molto bene. Anche il colore e le sfumature sono fatte molto bene; l'unica pecca è la falce sulla coda, che dovrebbe essere più grande
Riassumendo, è venuto molto bene ^^




Chi ha mangiato? ewe
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ZackTheRiolu Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
[l'unica pecca è la falce sulla coda, che dovrebbe essere più grande]
Porca miseria! Non l'avevo proprio vista! >.<   ..potrei correggerlo adesso ma lo terrò come esempio.
Chi ha mangiato è probabilmente il Makuhita di prima che siccome nessun'altro lo voleva al posto del suo allenatore, Seviper se ne aprofittato.
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GoldenSkarmory Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Student Writer
Povero Makuhita u.u
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