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Fear the lust of
a passionate heart
it might catch you
and run with you,
love

The metal gently
kisses the skin
covering her wrist
in blood

Black
in front of her eyes
deep into the night
she will find her peace
in death.
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Beckdg Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016
Very emotional! Well done! 
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016   Photographer
Thank you!
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Beckdg Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016
Very welcome! :) 
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XHeather-AnnX Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2016  Professional General Artist
You put in a lot of emotion and I could feel that. My eyes got a bit hot and a small ache in my throat. It is also so delicately written and not too overdone or under. It reads as something I would write and makes me feel a connection to it. Beautiful and haunting. Thank you for submitting to :iconsharpenededge:
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Yuukon Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016   Photographer
Thank you for your kind words, Heather. They mean a lot. :heart:
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