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[WTSM] - Chapter 1 (Scroll version)
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Published: April 14, 2015
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Flash version: [When the Stars Misalign] - Chapter 1 by yuuike



Genre:


Comedy, Drama,  Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural, Slice of life


Plot summary:


After six former childhood friends reunite in high school, Elyse and Jhyn encounters a girl that only they can see. Although the mysterious girl has no memories of her past, she is able to show them visions of the future. Can they alter the impending fate of their friends, before the inevitable day arrives?




Character & Story © yuuike
Art © yuuike

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BluePandasAreAwesome's avatar
Wow! I've been looking everywhere for a good original manga, and here one is. It kinda reminds me of Celestial Method.
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
ahhh thank you very much! >,<

Oooo does it? :iconhideplz: I shall have to search that up then~
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GirlyLink|Student General Artist
Man! It's too heavy for my Ipad even in this version!
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otaniime|Hobbyist Writer
ALL HAIL THE NEW MANGAKA!
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
haha thanks xD
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Tezeze|Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hmmm...... Interesting!! :D I have to read the second chapter too! xD Great work btw!! :love:
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
hahah yaay thank you very much! >v<
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Tezeze|Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're very welcome! ^_^
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ChubbyWolfJ|Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice!!! I'm hooked!!! Keep up the legit work!!!!!!!!!!Thumbs Up SPN Thumbs Up SPN Thumbs Up SPN Thumbs Up SPN Thumbs Up SPN Thumbs Up SPN Thumbs Up SPN Thumbs Up SPN Thumbs Up SPN 
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
haha thank you! ><
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ARocks11Edited |Hobbyist General Artist
HOW CAN YOU DRAW LIKE THAT!? It's so amazing and your coloring is awesome too, you must be some awesome professional at this stuff! Do you have a video on YouTube on how you color? And I hope you make the next chapter, this is an awesome manga you've written! Do you do draw and do everything by yourself or do have some help? :) (sorry for all the questions you're just really good at drawing) this also has all of my favorite genres and the summary is really interesting, the only thing I am confused on is who is who in the story and at the characters at the beginning and the same characters in high school I don't know which one is which (sorry this is really confusing, I don't know how to explain it) please don't be mad I am only confused so don't take it the wrong way like some other artists do. :)
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
Haha thank you! >< I draw everything myself. So far on Youtube I only have a video up on how I color skin: www.youtube.com/watch?v=k8u3Qy…

I am currently making the next chapter! ^v^ You can find the page by page updates on tapastic~ tapastic.com/series/wtsm I think if you look at "Chapter 2.1 (Page 0-1)" there's a character info page... that might help with who is who >< If you're talking about their child vs. teenage self, then you just have to compare the two scenes where all the characters are turning around (page 3 & 27)

Sorry i hope that makes sense! And don't worry about it >v< I love questions~ 
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ARocks11|Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thank you I'll definitely check it out! And I hope you make that next chapter soon the story has really captured my attention. And what art program do you use? Thank you for responding! :D
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
Haha np and thank you again xD For the manga I use photoshop CS6 and manga studio 5~
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ProkoLe|Student General Artist
Whoa, you draw manga? Awesome!
Looking forward to the next chapter! c:
And it has all of my favourite genres!
-punches air in a dark corner- YAAASSSSS
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
Eeeeee Thank you so much!:iconkiligplz: I'm glad you like it<3333
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ProkoLe|Student General Artist
Eh, no problem c: I need to look at the other stuff you make sometime, since there seems to e a lot o;
good luck for chem exam!
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KiHaSc's avatar
I love the title and the beginning of the manga! So creative! Love it, love it, love it! :)
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
ahahahah thank you very much <3333
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KiHaSc's avatar
No problem! You have great work!
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NormalIdeal's avatar
This looks very promising! But it took me three times to actually figure out how to read it and I still got a little lost o_o Maybe you could make the separation between pages more obvious? And some scenes also more obvious? Like the start had "So who is the new guy?" but the panel featuring the new guy was so small and blurry that I totally missed it and I was like "Huh? What guy?!"

Other than that, the main character looks like Suzume Yosano from Hirunaka no Ryuusei and the title is similar, too so I wonder if you got influenced by that manga? Luffy Anime Emoji (Wondering) [V5] 
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
thanks for the critique ^v^ 

this manga wasn't directly influenced by Hirunaka no Ryuusei but that was definitely one of my all time favs a while back so it probably did kinda seep into this xD someone else mentioned this too haha
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I also loved that manga :D Suzume had a large forehead like me and we had the same hairstyle and big eyes so I felt close xD Just the ending disappointed me. It was rushed and I shipped ShishioXSuzume so I was let down Cry forever Haha.

You're welcome for the critique ^^ Usually I get attacked when I do it so your reaction was a nice surprise :D
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yuuike|Student Digital Artist
Really? I actually really liked the ending contrary to the majority of the population aha. I think it's really refreshing to see a secondary character ends up with the protagonist.normally I always end up liking the side characters more than the main and it breaks my heart to see how the girl never choses them ; A ;

Haha no worries! I understand why people can get super defensive but as long as it's constructive criticism it's not like the commenter meant any harm xD besides I should be thanking you for taking the time you write it <33
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