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Yunguy1

Navy Sailor
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Artist // Hobbyist // Varied
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Super Albino: Llamas are awesome! (107)
My Bio
Career : Professional artist and proud US Navy Sailor.

Links:
Youtube : www.youtube.com/user/Yunguy1
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Hyun's Dojo : yun.hyunsdojo.com/

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Favourite Visual Artist
Resh, Nightea, 古川ヘッツァー, AegisFate, Hiten, DANGERDROP, 늑대가든
Favourite Movies
SPR, Fury, The Taxi Driver, The Admiral, Dunkirk, Interstellar
Favourite TV Shows
GATE: Jieitai Kanochi Nite, Shoujo Shuumatsu Ryokou
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Bloc Party, Phoenix, The Strokes, Hot Hot Heat, Hey Ocean!, The Wombats, Young The Giants, GROUPLOVE, Two Door Cinema Club, Passion Pit, Of Monsters and Men, Foals, Caravan Palace
Favourite Books
Hunger Games, Kindred, F451, The Giver
Favourite Writers
Arad
Favourite Games
Battlefield, Starcraft, Warthunder, Wargame
Favourite Gaming Platform
PC
Tools of the Trade
Macromedia Flash 8, Adobe Flash CS6, Photoshop CS6, Paint SAI
Other Interests
FPS Gaming, Music, RTS Gaming, War Gaming, Singing

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107 Badges
Llama: Llamas are awesome! (1)
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Comments

:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Dude fucking seriously. Why 18+? Never mind that.

I've seen this before you posted it here. So, I guess I can write critique.

1. The beginning where he prepares to fire is just a bit slow and should be sped up. I do like how you used the tweens to your advantage. Keep that up!
2. The overall should be sped up a bit.

I'm not too sure if you editted this a bit more than the previous one you showed, but that's all I could give judging from what I remember. So overall : Nice effects, good use of tweening, give it more speed, and yeah. c:
CBC3 Entry, Alpha Strike
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

The tire part should be worked on a bit. It looks like it's just sloppy cartoonish style. I don't like it when it comes to this type of animation. The beginning part where he goes in the car is just not done right. The view is just the front view of the steering wheel, but then the door is in it's flat view with a slight angle. Need to work on that. The tire marks were a nice touch, though it's a bit sloppy. Loved the smoke effects, the ignition, and the transitions. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> The smile could be smoothened out a bit so that it looks more complete. The smoke where the guy does a drift should be polished so that the smoke goes in the direction it last went.

Overall : 4.2/5
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Thank you.
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Okay at this point I'll just assume you're saying a made up story.
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