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Your reflection gazed back at you with a frown. Unhappy with what you saw you pinched your excess fat. You turned this way and that, assessing every possible angle of your body and criticizing even the most minuscule imperfections. You groaned and looked down in disappointment.  There would be no more feasting with Luffy every night you decided conclusively. You glanced back at the mirror only to be startled by the said raven-haired male standing behind you.

“Whatcha doin’ _____?” Luffy asked with a wide grin. He stared very much appreciating your scantily clad body.

You glared at the man, “LUFFY, what did I say about knocking before you come in here?”

“I did knock, and you just didn’t answer so I came in anyway. It’s time for dinner you know~” he pouted in a childish way. You paled, it was as if he knew your very thoughts and was plotting to ruin any semblance of resolve you once had.

“Oh, well I’m not very hungry Luffy, you can have my share if you want.” you replied dejectedly. At this the strawhat pirate exclaimed in joy at the thought of more food, before abruptly stopping and changing his mind.

“No, you have to eat it too. If you’re not eating, it’s no fun.”

“Luffy, I gained too much weight, I’m not you, you know? So I’ll just have to go on a diet for a little while.”

Luffy looked at you thoughtfully and then hit his fist in his hand and said, “Oh I get it, it’s mystery weight.”

To which you looked at him confusedly and wailed , “No, what are you talking about? It’s right here, all over me.”

“Well I don’t see any weight so it has to be a mystery if only you can see it right? Anyway, mystery weight or not, you gotta eat.” He grabbed you by your hand and started pulling you out of the room. He gave you a big grin and made your heart melt by saying, “You look beautiful no matter what _____.”
A little Luffy fluff! I don't own anything as always!
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Skull-Chick-of-Roses Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2017  Student Artist
'Luffy looked at you thoughtfully and then hit his fist in his hand and said, “Oh I get it, it’s mystery weight"...'

Lost it right then an there as I balled out laughing and my sis who's near me is like 'Wtf'? X'D It reminded me on how hilarious and cute our favourite captain can be X3

Hilarious houn, I LOVED this so much. Your a great writer. 

AmonaUchiha Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2016  Student General Artist
Fluffy Luffy! (Ha, see what I did there :D ... no? ... alright, I´m sorry .-.)
bakingfiction Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2016
so cute!
YumexNoxkidou10 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2016
Thank you so much!!  
phoenixjewls Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
YumexNoxkidou10 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2016
I'm so glad you liked it Clap 
phoenixjewls Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
It was nice
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