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Description
Character: Sinon (シノン, Shinon)
Sword Art Online II
Cosplayer: YukiGodbless
www.facebook.com/pages/Yuki-Godbless-FC/128280893850359?ref=bookmarks
Photographer: JiakiDarkness
Details : I spend 3 days to made this costume by my hand-self and I have JiakiDarkness support me many parts for the gun.About photo shoot our concept is trying to make it like high speed photography so you can see so many details in there
Sword Art Online II
Cosplayer: YukiGodbless
www.facebook.com/pages/Yuki-Godbless-FC/128280893850359?ref=bookmarks
Photographer: JiakiDarkness
Details : I spend 3 days to made this costume by my hand-self and I have JiakiDarkness support me many parts for the gun.About photo shoot our concept is trying to make it like high speed photography so you can see so many details in there
Image size
4288x2848px 8.29 MB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D5000
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
15 mm
ISO Speed
800
Date Taken
Sep 1, 2014, 2:45:36 PM
Comments12
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I bet you've spent quite a lot of time on this cosplay, but I hope you don't take this on a bad way.
So, here comes a bunch of constructive critisism to improve yourself for next time:
In my opinion you should've picked a normal fabric just like in the anime. This just doesn't resemble the type of fabric they've used.
Second, I agree with max20144 . I'm a rifle shooter myself and the pose is totally off. The rifle is completely held wrong: It's not against your shoulder, your hand should be holding under the rifle and not the barrel itself, that would just burn your hand off and from what I can tell you're not pullin the trigger (and as far as I can tell the rifle doesn't shoot itself lol). Also, you're not even looking through the scope, so you have no idea where you're even shooting.
And lastly, the empty shell should be flying away from you and not above your shoulder or scope or something.
We can tell on first glanse that you're an amateur when it comes to shooting a rifle.
So please next time before cosplaying into something unknown, look the correct poses up or ask someone to show you how to hold it. That way you make it look as realistic as can be and you will have a lot more favorites!
The photoshop editing is nice, but if your pose is wrong, it's just not as appealing.
I hope you can learn something from this comment ^^
So, here comes a bunch of constructive critisism to improve yourself for next time:
In my opinion you should've picked a normal fabric just like in the anime. This just doesn't resemble the type of fabric they've used.
Second, I agree with max20144 . I'm a rifle shooter myself and the pose is totally off. The rifle is completely held wrong: It's not against your shoulder, your hand should be holding under the rifle and not the barrel itself, that would just burn your hand off and from what I can tell you're not pullin the trigger (and as far as I can tell the rifle doesn't shoot itself lol). Also, you're not even looking through the scope, so you have no idea where you're even shooting.
And lastly, the empty shell should be flying away from you and not above your shoulder or scope or something.
We can tell on first glanse that you're an amateur when it comes to shooting a rifle.
So please next time before cosplaying into something unknown, look the correct poses up or ask someone to show you how to hold it. That way you make it look as realistic as can be and you will have a lot more favorites!
The photoshop editing is nice, but if your pose is wrong, it's just not as appealing.
I hope you can learn something from this comment ^^