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Jul 4, 2016, 2:59:19 PM
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This piece is really beautiful! The way you shade is amazing and I guess the way you handle the colors is great~ The poses were drawn pretty accurately and I think the whole set up for the photo is really nice!
One of my favorite parts along with the eyes of this is definitely the hair! It's flows very naturally and I just love how you add the sort of hair texture by using different thickness in strokes~ I like the expressions and like the hair, the clothes also seem very flowy and natural.
The simple background definitely adds the the pieces and the flowers on the edges are a nice touch!~
I didn't find many problems with either piece. One thing is that the girl on the right only seems to hair one eyebrow and that eyebrow seems to be moved too far to the middle of the face.
Another thing that could be an issue is the anatomy. For the girl on the left, her bust seems to curve a bit unnaturally. For the girl on the right, one of the hands looks very unnatural because of how it curves.
I think this is probably just the angle I'm looking at it, but the busts on both seems like they could be raised a little.
Really nice work on both of these and I hope I can see more of your gorgeous art in the future! >u< /