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One Wish

By Yukieru
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 I got some new nibs and had some free time so sketched a bit with some ink 
So meet one of the few OC's that i kind of got into designing while i was gone. 
  i also somehow created a couple that i hope i'll be able to introduce to you all before school catches up with me again ; - ;  
Anybody have some ideas for a name? I'd love to hear what you think
Thank you so much for stopping by! and i hope you enjoy :D
Art and Character (c) Yukieru 
Image details
Image size
2223x2249px 3.13 MB
Make
SAMSUNG
Model
SGH-I727R
Aperture
F/0.7
Focal Length
4 mm
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© 2015 - 2021 Yukieru
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Hi! Just saying this is not by any means to say i dislike the drawing 'cause i absolutely love it! I Think there are like 2 things i'd like to point other than what AmosZZ said I think the blushies are nice but you could get them a little better in the right one it doesnt look like one and the Other thing is.... How do I say this....? the "boobs" area in general is kinda loose its strange you could make it look better in general, like the whole area. The shading is like AmosZZ said Perfect! Seriously good job at shading it! Other than that have a lovely Day ;D
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Ahhh thank you so much for the lovely critique!! OUuu!! I'm still practicing my shading XD and trying out different styles, so i'll try that out!!
But thank you so much again for your advice!! It's extremely helpful!! :iconletmehugyouplz:
subanker2000's avatar
u are welcome and btw i draw too if u could spare some time just pass by just posted my first deviation from the anime your lie in april or shigatsu wa kimi no uso
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but as i said overallits very good ill be posting anime and manga too so stay tuned
Yukieru's avatar
Ahh thank you!!~~ and ouu goodluck!!
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I think it is absolutely gorgeous, you really are very good at portraying ruffles/folds.
Though I would probably have made her mouth differently, like some lips, I think with your advanced shading ability you could pull that off nicely.
All in all I'm totally in love with this piece and wish someday I could perfect my shading s well as you have.
Also maybe some colors? Fading maybe? Would be quite lovely <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
Can tell that you really love what you are doing and it shows.
Keep up the good work!
Beautimous, fabulous, whimsical
Goodness they make you write a lot of words xD
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Ahhh thank you so much for the lovely critique!! OUuu!! I'm still practicing my shading XD and trying out differenct styles, so i'll try that out!! When other artists shade lips, it looks lovely but when i try... it looks like a failed attempt ; - ;
But thank you so much again for your advice!! It's extremely helpful!!
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Cool OC! I think her hair(especially the thin flyaway strands) and eyes are really cool and I like the way you decided to dress her a lot. I think her face may look better with a little bit more of a nose and possibly not as big a gap in the two lines that make up her mouth. The shading you used is absolutely perfect, very realistic! I do think her right arm(the one on the left side of the picture) may be a bit big in general, and I can't seem to find out where her other arm is in the picture. I think she'll make a very nice character if you decide to keep drawing her! And for a name, I have two suggestions, don't even ask how I came up with them: Genevieve or Nyx. She kind of strikes me as German or Northern European.
mr-sockit's avatar
I like the name nyx. :)
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ahh thank you so much for the lovely critique!!
LOLOL i guess my anatomy is still pretty rusty XD and lol you're correct about her left arm, halfway through, i realized it blended in so well with her dress and it looked like it just disappared into thin air XD

ouuu! thank you so much for the name suggestions! Those are really pretty :iconloveloveplz: 
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Yukieru's avatar
ahhh thank you so much ; - ; I'm so glad you like it!!
Yukieru's avatar
ahhh thank you so much!!:iconuhuhuhuplz: I'm so glad you like it!! 
subanker2000's avatar
i thinkher name could be chisa kakeru because it sounds nice have a lovely day :D
Yukieru's avatar
ahhh that's lovely name~~ Thank you so much!!
Amabilior's avatar
I'd name her Amelia, because it just sounds nice :D
Yukieru's avatar
ahh that's a lovely name~~ Thank you!!
Amabilior's avatar
You're welcome!
Pyoki's avatar
that's so cool 8)
Yukieru's avatar
ahh thank you so much ; - ; :iconuhuhuhuplz: I'm so glad you like it!!! <3
Laisya's avatar
this looks so damn sweet Ryuuko Ryuushi Mifune (Moe and feeling love) [V1] 
Yukieru's avatar
ahhh thank you so much :iconuhuhuhuplz: I'm so glad that you like it!!! 
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