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:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:Wha... Where're those Gels?!? They've gone missing by the barrels!!!
:iconcarolineportalplz::iconsaysplz:Mr. Johnson, Rainbow Dash just ordered them; dozens of barrels of gels. I'm not sure what she's going to do with them but...
:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:Hahahahaha! That girl, always on the move. That's what I like! Deliver the gels to her house this instant. I'd love to see what she'll be using with those! Perhaps we can even see a Land Based Sonic Rainboom!

This one is aimed to practice more on fast paced animation as well as hair dynamics. I don't know if I got them right, but let's see about that...

By the way, I need to hire a repairman after Twilight broke my laptop screen... Those things cost quite a fortune you know?!?

Speaking of which, Feedback and/or critique is most welcome. And please don't hold back, if you think I deserve some scolding and constructive criticism, go hard on me.

Once again, I wish to give credit to :iconsprybug: who had taught me all the newer techniques that allow me to create better animations (not to mention easier too!) And of course all of you guys who have kindly gave me feedback and critiques; it goes a lot into improving!

Next up on the list would be most likely the Alicorn sisters as they try to outwit each other and lock themselves in a deadly game of Portal Combat. Featuring Pony Cave Johnson!

Music is "Rainbow Road" and its variation: [link]

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
Portal (c) Valve

Program used: Macromedia Flash 8

Other thinking with portals:

:iconderpynoesplz: Postal: [link]

:iconpinkieismindfckedplz: Prank: [link]

:iconapplejacknoesplz::iconapplebloomplz::iconeeyupplz: Maintenance: [link]

:iconsarcasticlunaplz::iconcelestiaunamusedplz::iconcavejohnsonplz::iconcarolineportalplz: Trust and Cooperation: [link]

:iconfluttercryplz:Home Alone: [link]
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Definitely an enjoyable watch as you could see the deviousness in Rainbow Dash's mind from the beginning. The animation was very fluidic providing a smooth feel to the movie. Some movies i've seen don't have a good transition from scene to scene while this one alleviated that problem.

As for the story it seems predictable, but the part with her going off the ramp full blast into her home was funny. Truthfully I liked the part that she didn't just slam into the cloud wall, instead she crashed right through it onto her bed. Also found the ending to be enjoyable with our lovable derpy delivering some bad news to Rainbow that she owes quite a bit of...well bits for her stunts.

Well done OP and I can't wait to see your Celestia vs Luna animation. I await with great anticipation for that little number. :D
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My 4th critique in your hilarious pony portal animations.

I had to watch a few times like with the other portal animations but this time it took me a few replays before I noticed you used Rainbow Road music from Mario Kart games. :XD:

You made Dashie badass looking. (like she isnt ever not badass lol)

The parts that stood out the most were poor Twilight smashing the screen, which startled me on first time I watched this rofl and other one was where Dashie slams into her house and breaks through wall. (not fourth wall, but i wish >.<) It makes me think what was the point of her breaking her own wall on house even though I laughed semi-hard.

Also I noticed that you did same procedure with Derpy Hooves like in episode 2 but it was basically skipped this time cause it was obvious that it was Dashie's time to shine :XD: but where the heck did she get another portal gun since her other one was tossed in the hole she made in episode 2?

The time for reading the bill was a little too short, i had to screenshot it and read it that way. The music was fitting for each scene and it made me feel like I was watching Mario Kart pony style cause of the proper music.

Review done but as a bonus thing to mention, why is Twilight badly hurt in each episode, she's too "adorkable" (except episode 3 with apple family) and it seems strange why Dashie didn't think it through about the price for all that stuff before she got it all. Personally, even though Dashie is my favorite now, I think this is the best one its epic and badass and it had 2 themes (Portals obviously and Mario Kart) instead of one, which the others had. There will always be minor flaws but it doesnt really matter to most of us, just there to help out with improvements. Keep up epic work!
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MelodyKeylight2017 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2018  Hobbyist Filmographer
AlkemyFreak Featured By Owner May 29, 2018
There is nothing about this I didn't like XD
4dojo Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2017
that poor purple one keeps getting hurt XD
EduardoThePictureGuy Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2017  Student Artist
Ameliaparson2010 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2017
What the heck   is this ? England (Laughing) [V3] :blah: :blah: :blah: Hatsune Miku-04 (Laughs) Laugh LOL Laugh LOL Jacksepticeye Triggered Laugh Laugh 
TweshDash Featured By Owner May 25, 2017
congratulations Twilight is Dead
DrashieDragon Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2017
R.I.P Twilight
WyattStoneNCC96230A Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Wow, excellent animatons. :)
KrazyKoen Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2016
A Happy, Green Dorito Mettaton EX Ohh..YES LazyIcon I wanna use - 8 FLOWEY Adventure Chica Triggered icon rainbow dash my little pony mlp brony 
RainbowDash25525 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2016
hahahahah Twilight
Roman-Santos Featured By Owner May 3, 2016
how does Dashie holds that portal gun?
AnyaTheDuck Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2016
how long did this take to make???
Silver--Eclipse Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2016   General Artist
skylanders456 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2016  Student Digital Artist
what happened to twilight ?
Doctorshak10 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  Student Digital Artist
ScarlettStarMLP Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Not named Rainbow Road due to copyright issues. c:
Shapeless101 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2015
Rainbow Dash your'e dash
LavaDagger Featured By Owner May 15, 2015
That must've been fun! (For Rainbow Dash, I mean)
Cookiestarisakitty Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
dat rainbow road music..
fluttershylover20 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
Why was Twilight in a wheel chair? LOL!!!
MKBrony Featured By Owner May 29, 2015
You have to see earlier videos in the series.
SwagMidNightBlossom Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
heh lol twilight
Raerae2234 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
that was coolHeart +fav OMG! I can't contain my excitement! 
gummy10020 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Writer
poor twilight :/
flower2563 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Hobbyist
SnowflakeThePony337 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
i just love the way you animate.....
AmichanAmesan Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
poor twilight
HeartinaRosebud Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
casualartist89 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student Artist
amazing great animation you have skills
derpyhoovemuffins Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
Lol Heart  it!!! irainbowdash :rainbowdash: 
sufk1331 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
:rainbowdash: Rainbow awesome lick Rainbow Dash Licking gif Waving Sparks 
sufk1331 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014
Beats (free avatar) Heart free avatar Heart - Free Heart Love Frozen - HUG! Pinkie sad pinkamena icon 
Rarity672 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That was awesome!
Lost-Our-Dreams Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Enderman699 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Professional Artist
Rainbow Dash launched away Twilight Sparkle.
shadegirl787 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
if rd can do it every pony can
shadegirl787 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
its all unfair 
Larwolf Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
Twilight! NO!!
GT4tube Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
lol twilight wtf xd
rainbowdashie12 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
15, 2013 New member
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
Pattinaggio Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
wow it's awesome!! Pinkie Pie Scream01 
mr15theminecrafter Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
damn that is the third screen replacement this year
Pandacorn6 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gr8 animation! hilarious!
R4lNB0W Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow now you can run as fast as you can fly
tclego Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I see what you did there with the Rainbow Road theme.... :D
rnoonpies Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Princesscadence345 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Professional Artist
lol dang rd
halzyan Featured By Owner May 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now she has to pay for all those gels, AND a broken wall! She could of just used the portals to get in...
dragonlover1234567 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol amazing
Tesla51 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Twilight just can't catch a break!

Well, Rainbow Dash, that is the price you pay for a 30 second thrill.
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