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MLP Thinking with Portals: Lamp Maintenance



:iconcavejohnsonplz::iconsaysplz:And thus my Aperture Science Handheld Portal Device has gone commercial in Equestria! With only 60 bits, you can have one. And it seems that Applebloom managed to get her hands on one using her spare pocket money, and still get a jar of Conversion gel too! Will she be using it for the good cause? I'm watching you Applebloom, use that thing wisely!

Twi got herself a break :iconcrazytwilightplz:. She's still in hospital trying to free herself out of that mailbox :XD:

I decided to take a leap forward by putting a minute long short. Too bad this doesn't look very good to me personally...

Speaking of which, Feedback and/or critique is most welcome. And please don't hold back, if you think I deserve some scolding and constructive criticism, go hard on me.

Somehow I felt being something of a failure, with very little improvement going on since starting this portal series... :( Can't blame it on anyone but myself, seems like the glass ceiling is a little harder than she used to be...

Enough with the ranting. We'll be playing with more colourful gels the next "thinking with portals!" By the way, if you guys have any ideas, I'm welcome to hearing it.

Wait... shall I go with Rainbow Dash on her journey home, or shall I go with Twilight whose eager for some retribution?

Music is "The Sims 3 Pets" [link]

My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic (c) Hasbro
Portal (c) Valve

Program used: Macromedia Flash 8

Other thinking with portals:

:iconderpynoesplz: Postal: [link]

:iconpinkieclapplz: Prank: [link]

:iconrainbowdashderpplz: Rainbow Highway: [link]

:iconsarcasticlunaplz::iconcelestiaunamusedplz::iconcavejohnsonplz::iconcarolineportalplz: Trust and Cooperation: [link]

:iconfluttercryplz:Home Alone: [link]
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Ok heres my first critique. so here we go:

First of all, i absolutely love the idea. ponies + portal = awesome. so for vision id say 4.5. as for originallity, 5. i havn't seen anything like this. technique, ive seen better (not from me i assure you) but ive seen ALOT worse (god only knows what ive seen). so for that, 4.
i'd like to also add that i like the way you didn't make the ponies talk. i mean, it would have been cool but you couldnt find the right voice or god forbid voice yourself (iveseenbadthings)
Overall, 4.5 outta 5.