yesi-chan

I basically agree with the first two critiques and this is a very beautiful picture. The only thing I wanted to add was regarding her hand. It doesn't really look all that odd to me at all but I think if you had shaded it differently it would look more "correct". I'm looking at it as if her hand isn't just flat on the desk but rather the fingers are kind of curved but I think that would be more noticeable with more shading on the fingers. That said I just love the idea of this picture and the way you detailed the keyboard, laptop and the other computer screen wow it's just really amazing. Really cool idea, pretty well executed!

thanks for the feedback ^^ I wasn't planning on changing anything but I wanted input for future reference so this is good to know

you're not wrong xD