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Cloudy floor

By Yaphleen
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light experiment.

I love cloud reflection in buildings. It's like the clouds can enter in the building windows. I've tried to represent that in surreal. But I need to study more the light. I'm waiting for your critiques, I'll read them next week.

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line: pencil on paper
colors: photoshop cs3
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musicmitri's avatar
hnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng are you serious ? amazing
ReclusiveChicken's avatar
Can we tell the difference?
sharknob's avatar
Aww man this is beautiful! you really did a great job!
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Kazemizu's avatar
Your art style is so enchanting. I could stare at it all day.
Tenatoro's avatar
Honestly, I think what made the picture look slightly... off (to me at least), was that building in the background. I think that if the glass building on the right were to take up the entire frame, it would have had more of an impact. I understand that adding the real clouds in the background was purposeful, and also points the attention to the girl. I do, however, like that the cloud seems to 'holding hands' with the girl. But if the entire picture were the glass building, and she was reaching out to the reflection of a cloud, I think it would add more dimension.
As for the light I think all that needs is a small glare somewhere, but otherwise, a fantastic job!
Again these are all just opinions, so ignore me if you disagree with what I'm suggesting! :3 
Gajutsu's avatar
Beautiful ^_^
PharaonicWolf's avatar
This is so interesting - it's almost like an optical illusion.
Maru89's avatar
I love the way you color like watercolor, you know? I need a tutorial from that!! xD (I've tried to do that, and I can't :( )
EpicMyst's avatar
So supremely cute! I love this concept!

What a delight you are ^^
Trillatia's avatar
This is just lovely!! Amazing job! :)
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starg691's avatar
gosh! I love the melancholic feeling of this piece! and the colors and movement are amazing :heart:
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agnes-cecile's avatar
you should try it, I really liked this one in the preview, now I'd like to see it with your beautiful final hand :)
kelleybean86's avatar
Beautiful work. There's a lot of nice stuff going on here - I particularly like the slice of pink near the character.
The shape of the cloud near the girl's hands kind of makes it look like she's blowing smoke. It would be nice if her gesture and expression made it clear that she was either gathering the clouds into her arms or sending them out or something.
PetiteBubu's avatar
Very beautiful! I love it!
CrissaRain's avatar
wow! it's really awesome~ keep spirit~ >____<
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PostWaveCore's avatar
This actually works pretty well with the music I'm chillin' to right now.
KipetuAkora's avatar
This is so absolutely beautiful :heart:
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