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WOW thanks so much for the wonderful cretic.And yes I to know it could have been done better, I was first evan thinking if the Pikture was good enouf for DA.But now im realy glad i put it up. Thanks again.

oh my gosh this It one of the Cutest minuns ive ever seen !!
OK than il start with my cretic
linearet
its a good lineart. but its A tini bit to unround, it would look better if it where a lil smoover.althou i know how dificoult degetal drawing is. so exilent job.
shading
its a simple but efective typ of shading,but somehow the right cheek looks a lil odd cause there is no shading on it. other than that good work.
cutness
this pikture slammes over all cuteness records the cutness is incredable.
Thanks for making this wonderful pikture, again its so cute !!!

I know you will

im very happy you liked my critik,you are a great artist, continue the good work.

oh how adorable, i realy love this pikture, because of its origenality, id like to start my critic with the background.I realy like the background of this pikture cause it magicly creates a cosy loving atmosphere.the black line on the one side, givs the impression that you are peeking into a room.And the wite lines draw your atention to the center, where the most inportend part is. the charackters. I am amased by the cuteness of the Pichus,and its interesting to see that evan without drawing the eys correcty, you can acieve a magnificant cute face. the only thing i can think of what could have been done better,is, if it wasnt planned by you to make it more interesting, to have the lines beeing continued in the places of the wite squares.And if it is so that this efect was wanted,please egnore what i said about it, since you as artist are aloud to do something the way you please, so i can not crittises Origenality. there is however a mini detail that could have been done better, the tail of the left pichu, kinda dosnt look like its atached to its body. cause the conecting peace,looks a lil to pointi. And if i may say, its a very beautiful pikture.Oh, and they all have no nose, wich could be cause (out of my exereance) thy do sometimes look better without, witch is why it could be that you didnt give them nones on purpes. all in all wonderfull pikture, great work, and nice theam. (I apoligise greatly for my spelling, wich you have probably notised isnt very good. I hope you could read my cretic.)