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The Temple of Bloom - Page 21

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Scootaloo's bad flight school memories are maybe influenced by my own experiences from one summer when I was put into swimming school. Let's just say I survived it. This went pretty late, so please tell if you spot any spelling mistakes (and I'm glad I don't have anything in tomorrow morning).

Here's a textless version for translators: sta.sh/024p9xnqtv62

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I suppose "something" is the best thing to expect in that situation.

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XeviousGreenIIHobbyist Traditional Artist
Expectations are as low as they can be!
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I'm all for ambition, but at this point in your life you should really be ambitious closer to the ground.
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Sometimes life just throws you into a high place.
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hehe I really love comic strip :) I love your comic. Is it A3 paper?
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Thanks! It's two A4's, so basically A3, with the exception that you can't do a panel that goes through the middle of the page, or at least it'd be hard :D (Big Grin)
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You're welcome! :D aw bummer! I have scanner only A4 paper.
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An A3 scanner would be so big that I would probably need to buy another desk for it anyway :D (Big Grin)
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In Scootaloo's speech bubble in the last panel, you should move the "nearby" to the end of the sentence.

Very good comic.
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I wanted to end the bubble with "something", but I guess it could be improved for readability. Alternatively, I could use "nearby" as an adjective, i.e. "a nearby tavern". But thanks for pointing out, I'll try to fix it one way or another.
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pretty =) 
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Thanks :) (Smile)
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:):) :huggle: :):) you very welcome my friend :):) :hug: :):)
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Aww but she needs to learn to fly independently! Did her wings not improved much?
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I feel like the problem might be psychological.
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Haha 
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Oh that was good, Very nicely done here.
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Thank you!
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Awesome to see the next page of your comic :)
I love how much in character all the characters are and especially the expressions fit really well. I feel very much with "Scootie-Lootie" when she gets levitated to the ground hooves folded and not quite certain if she should be relieved about not crashing or annoyed about what probably feels a bit humiliating to her.
Also great work on the lights and shading. I really love your work and am looking forward to the next page. 
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Thanks and glad you like!
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