Seems Like Forever by xeneras

Hi, I would have to agree with iamkomics1's comment about the contrast. I think its just a touch bright on the foreground.
Maybe some dodge and burning could be employed here.

I quickly loaded this image into Photoshop and added a saturation layer, I played around with that and found it looked a bit better simply dropping the lightness down to around -10. It just took the emphasis off the models leg and more to her right arm and face.

I'd also be interested in seeing this shot with slightly less depth of field as I found my eye being distracted by the detail in the light fitting.

Other than that, I'd say its a cracking shot. Well done.