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Rain
Here is thunder, here is rain
The dripping sounds drives some insane
But as rain hits my window sill
It calms me down until I'm still
As wind is churning the sea to foam
Tighter I draw my coat onto my form
With thunder roaring there is no doubt
That I may, from fright, just scream and shout
But despite the latter I say
"Rain I like you anyway"
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Literature
Haiku for Wintertime
Rain hits the roof top
Time to make myself some tea
Ah, so relaxing
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Literature
Blackout
Turn on the lights, I cannot see
There is nothing to do for me
To amuse myself must use my eyes
But without light it's all but lies
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Literature
Mess
"I am also tired of this mess
I really am, even more than you"
Really? Is that true?
Then how come this clutter of a house
Is caused not by my me
But rather you?
If we imagine our house a sea
How much would you like to bet
That it is your stuff I will find
If I cast in and drag up a net
"I will throw it out tomorrow"
Or so you've said before
But somehow it rarely happens
And it's been like this from yore
This is not how you clean up
This is how you procrastinate
I see we need to talk
You need an intervention, "mate"
Listen up "buddy"
Cleaning up goes like this:
You throw out more than you bring in
And this is how
You shrink a mess
And just to act as contrast
I'll explain how we got this clutter:
You brought things in more than you threw out
And cleaning up you rarely bothered
Don't you dare blame someone else
This is entirely your fault
That we have so many boxes
That have so much dust they started to molt
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Literature
Horror Newspaper Ad
New horror for sale
Will eat friends and family
Without skip or fail
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Literature
Rhyming is Easy
Rhyming is easy
But poetry leaves doubts
"Are these the best rhymes
That I could spit out?"
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Literature
I Am My Own Sorrow
I built my own cell
And locked myself within
Threw the key away
To the monster within
Doomed to feel failure
Regardless of success
Even when I'm done
I'm never gonna rest
Dealt a bad hand
Then built a prison for myself
My happiness unused
Forever dusted on a shelf
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Literature
Shall I Compare Thee to a Summer's Day
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
When it's 30°C and it's 80% humidity
And the electricity bill aggravated by the AC
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Literature
The Weaver
Beyond what a mortal's prayer can reach
Beyond even a god's beseech
Lies one so vast so great
The whole world did it create
The weaver of fates such as it
Has no other equivalent
Even the gods to it bow down
To it alone belongs the crown
So if at something you are stuck
You're better off pleading Lady Luck
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Literature
Creator's Insecurities
Is it good or is it bad
This inspirations that I had
Is it good or is it not
This poem that my head has wrought
Should it go to gallery or to scraps I wonder
This thing that I wrote and no other
Omg I clicked submit
Will it be a bust, or, as I hope, a hit?
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Literature
Lady Luck
Lady Luck I silently
Wish to invoke upon me
The blessings of gracious thee
To invoke lady luck
Three times three the bell must be struck
First three invoke the King of Fools
To bend and and break plans and rules
The expected toll of the next three
Summons the King of Beggars upon me
Now to invoke Lady Luck
The final three must be struck
Lady Luck I silently
Wish to invoke gracious thee's
Sacred blessing upon me
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Literature
Buying Groceries
רוטב צ'ילי פה מוציא לי
אפזר על הבשר
את הפוקצ'ה על המצה
אוכל כבר מחר
פסטה, פסטה
זה טוב עם קצת סלט
את המצה אוכל על המחבט
קונה פה לי, קונה פה לך
קונה פה לי, קונה פה לך
פומפיה קטנה קונה פ&
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Literature
King of Fools
A rascal I am upon the thrown
A crown rests on my sacred dome
All the scoundrels hail to me
I give my blessings onto thee
So fickle I am, like Lady Luck
One moment a beam, another, a cruck
To invite me call me thrice
Beware my blessings' hidden price
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Literature
Reading in a Storm
Drip. Drop
Drip. Drop
I'm watching the rain while reading a book
While I turn the pages out the window I look
Drip. Drop
Drip. Drop
A thunder is rolling. Is it far or near?
I can't see the lightning and that is clear
Drip. Drop
Drip. Drop
The sky is stormy, but that is OK
Because I'm finally at peace in this piece of grey.
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Literature
Snork a Dork
I have a dork
I like to snork dorks
Do you like to snork a dork?
You should try
You should find your own dork to snork
You can take my dork
Take him, so you can try and snork
At least one dork
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Literature
To Remember When All Is Lost
When you lose all your hope
When everything is forever lost
When you don't think things will be OK
When your out of luck
Even if it's only a kiss or a hug
I'll be here for you
Even if all I can do is listen
Or give an advice for you
Don't lose your faith, my friend,
Because I'm here for you
I'll be here all day
Even if you don't know what to do
Don't lose your faith, my friend,
You have someone who cares
Even if all is lost
I'll still care for you
So don't lose your faith my friend
Because even if it's a shot in the dark
Things just might improve for you
Even by some small bit of luck
Through fire thick or thin,
I will be your companion
We will both ride into battle
On a great trusty stallion
So don't lose your faith, my friend,
For you have someone who cares
Even if all is lost
I will still love you
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Here is thunder, here is rain
The dripping sounds drives some insane
But as rain hits my window sill
It calms me down until I'm still

As wind is churning the sea to foam
Tighter I draw my coat onto my form
With thunder roaring there is no doubt
That I may, from fright, just scream and shout

But despite the latter I say
"Rain I like you anyway"
Rain
Made for a challenge from PoetsOfDA

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Rain hits the roof top
Time to make myself some tea
Ah, so relaxing
Haiku for Wintertime
Originally made for a contest, but I didn't notice while writing it that it doesn't qualify, so no point submitting it.
Still, felt it's a shame to throw away a good poem, so here it is

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Turn on the lights, I cannot see
There is nothing to do for me
To amuse myself must use my eyes
But without light it's all but lies
Blackout
I few days ago I suffered a blackout caused by a thunderstorm. The blackout remained for quite a while, which caused me a problem, since at this time of year night comes pretty quickly, so I was stuck early evening, in the darkness, with nothing to do, since almost everything that can keep my interest requires light. Which means that I had to sit in boredom in the darkness too awake to sleep but effectively incapable to do anything interesting.
The most frustrating thing about the whole ordeal is that this is a yearly occurrence, and every year the electrical company displays inadequacy at handling storms and rain. You'd expect the infrastructure to be prepared, since rain and storms are a yearly occurrence, but it's apparently not.
By the way, the blackout occurred in multiple cities.

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"I am also tired of this mess
I really am, even more than you"
Really? Is that true?
Then how come this clutter of a house
Is caused not by my me
But rather you?

If we imagine our house a sea
How much would you like to bet
That it is your stuff I will find
If I cast in and drag up a net

"I will throw it out tomorrow"
Or so you've said before
But somehow it rarely happens
And it's been like this from yore

This is not how you clean up
This is how you procrastinate
I see we need to talk
You need an intervention, "mate"

Listen up "buddy"
Cleaning up goes like this:
You throw out more than you bring in
And this is how
You shrink a mess

And just to act as contrast
I'll explain how we got this clutter:
You brought things in more than you threw out
And cleaning up you rarely bothered

Don't you dare blame someone else
This is entirely your fault
That we have so many boxes
That have so much dust they started to molt
Mess
Venting some steam

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KaidokJ Featured By Owner 1 day ago   Digital Artist
Thanks for the llama :happybounce:

I knew a llama once. At least I thought I knew him. I mean, how well can anyone really know anyone, much less a llama. With their air of mystery and thinly veiled contempt. It’s hard. But I digress.
His name was Kevin. But for reasons I will never understand, he would only ever answer to Albert. Identity issues aside, things started out okay. The usual introductory sniffing and sneezing went well, despite his allergies, but then things started going downhill during the ritual licking phase of the pleasantries. We pushed through. And had it not been for the spitting, we might have even been able to make it work, but alas, after just 3 seconds of bittersweet brotherhood, we finally decided to part ways. It’s kind of sad, when you think about it. Spitting seems like such an innocent thing to fight over, but he was pretty adamant that I should stop and that was just never going to happen. We might have overcome that issue, but Kevin, like all llamas, was very competitive. First came the stench competitions. Then it was belching contests. And lastly, a painstaking count to see which one was hairier. You can clearly see why our relationship was doomed. The poor fellow was a bit of a sore loser.
So he snuck out, taking with him a failed friendship, an obliviously optimistic dread of the future, and my sixth favorite toothbrush. Now that he is gone, I can honestly say, it's for the best. He was too much of a chick magnet anyway and who needs that drama? :shakefist:

Full disclaimer, as Kevin’s official biographer, a position of which he blackmailed me into (don’t ask), I’ve been instructed to inform you about his ongoing series. The journey starts here with The Kevin Chronicles - Chapter 1, and this gallery contains the rest. You should check it out.

*End of cue card*

And don't worry, they're pretty short.
No pressure though, only if you want.

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Xender1500 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist Writer
Noted XD
You're welcome
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Pajunen Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Thanks for the fav!
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Xender1500 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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jennylizmanga Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
Happy Halloween!

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Thank you so much, feel free to watch me if you like my art ^^
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Xender1500 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :D
Happy Halloween to you too! :D
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lilyrjensen Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2018   Digital Artist
Hi there!
I just wanted to say thank you so much for the watch! You just made my day! La love 


I'm so happy to know that you like what I do! I hope you have a wonderful day xx Heart
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Xender1500 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! :D
I'm happy to hear! I hope u have a wonderful day too :D
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SUOMAR Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch!
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Xender1500 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
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