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Super Llama: Llamas are awesome! (27)
My Bio
I love drawing from redrawing manga characters to trying to create my own...,i also make digital images like wallpapers,banners etc next to that i also make amv's on youtube

Favourite Visual Artist
yuumei
Favourite Movies
none at the moment
Favourite TV Shows
kiss x siss
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
BOA Kwon
Favourite Books
anything manga
Favourite Games
story based rpg's
Favourite Gaming Platform
playstation
Tools of the Trade
drawing tablet,mouse,hands,pencil

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This Prologue really makes me curious bout the rest of the story

bout the cover( if it is the cover your planning to use)

why not put the main character of the story instead of a <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="15" alt=":hmm:" title="hmm"/> breastfull <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="15" alt=":hmm:" title="hmm"/> mistress

i like the way it looks but i don't see the link with the story {yet}
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="15" alt=":hmm:" title="hmm"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="15" alt=":hmm:" title="hmm"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="15" alt=":hmm:" title="hmm"/>

very nice tough

i also think it's a bit too busy

alot of texts
try making Prologue:History Lesson smaller or don't add those at all

you can also place just Lostkitten in a corner for watermarking instead of a URL this will make much more visible of the image

keep up the good work on making stuff like this
Hehe ... tried that but its way too many frames ...
Haruhi suzumiya bootscreen
nice . but next time please add the source you used as a reference (as this is 1 on 1 with my own pencil sketch only shrinked down in size) :no:

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