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This has been floating in my head over the past couple of weeks and I've been in a sadistic ecchi mood lately (*/m does that to me :hmm:). So I decided to let my perverted dark half loose when I wrote this up.

I left it on a cliffhanger because I'm almost considering this to be a series. Problem is, that would give me another saga to worry about. And I'm not sure how many of my watchers actually read for the kinky stuff. ^^;

I put up a mature content filter because of the nudity throughout the entire story. I'm not going into anything beyond PG-13, though.

So I'll leave it up to the readers. Should I actually continue this into an actual series or leave it as is?

Based on the positive feedback, yes. I'll make this a series. :meow:
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Triodon's avatar
TriodonHobbyist General Artist
I honestly think you should continue this but if you're gonna put it as mature content maybe add something more then tickling?
markzilla6895's avatar
So will this still be a series?
ktensei's avatar
ktenseiHobbyist Writer
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!
FTGenikit's avatar
Wow! That was actually one great story! :D
kwtsag's avatar
how is that story going? ^^
Randomguy712's avatar
Please continue this! SOON!
SHADOWKamen's avatar
I would love to see more of this!
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Guardian-of-Light137Student Writer

So much fourth wall breaking. But done in a good way. Looking forward to more also faved.

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angelface714Hobbyist Traditional Artist
U should totally make this a series, but maybe u should finish the other series first, u might see some crazed stalkers outside ur window to finish them rofl
Awesome-nee's avatar
Im....not sure what to think about this XD
shinigamisparda's avatar
Well, certainly wasn't expecting that reveal.
Maain's avatar
Continue this is awesome :)
Hermione-Cullen-18's avatar
Hermione-Cullen-18Hobbyist Writer
omg series please!!!!!!
Moonfire27's avatar
Oooohh my god. Please make this a series.
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SoraandKairiforever1Hobbyist Writer
Heh, I wouldn't be suprised if Roxas, Sora, Hayner, Terra and Ventus were reading this. XD Then it would be like, "Pfff...HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAA!!! Ok, that was fun, now let's go save them."
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SoraandKairiforever1Hobbyist Writer
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ CONTINUE!!!
TykkiMikk's avatar
uhh i cant think of a comment to all of this...
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darkness876Student General Artist
I agree with kookiekween focus on the wedding and switched but work on this in your spare time ( if you have any?)
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AnHeiressofaSOLDIERHobbyist Writer
I think you and I are on the same wavelength. LOL. I actually made a picture a long time ago that was (kind of) in support of the Roxas/Accessory Shop Girl pairing ([link]). I mean, he was her favorite customer. And Roxas looked "happy" in the picture with the "girl" (I'm shamelessly stealing Olette and Hayner's lines about it). I mean, those are hints, but does anyone remember her or ship her? No. I feel her pain!

In all honesty, I'm glad you included her. You're right. KH doesn't have enough girls (which is why I was hoping MF was a girl in disguise, but alas it's young Xehanort). I'd actually meant to write a story with her, but after writing a Roxas drabble with her (the link to which can be found in the above picture's description, if you're curious), I realized it'd be too difficult. I'm glad someone else has taken up the challenge, though! And I'm glad that someone's you. I love all your stories. They're so hilarious!

Also, I feel like Olette's a spy. After all, people used to ship her with Roxas, too. But that also crashed and burned. She's secretly working with the Accessory Shop Girl! LOL.

Roxas has WAY too many girlfriends. I mean, Olette, Naminé, Xion, the Accessory Shop Girl, some people ship him with Kairi (which makes a bit of sense, I guess); and I think I've even seen some Roxas/Aqua (though, technically, I think most people that do that have the flawed idea that, "he's Ven, so..."). Yep. I definitely feel the Accessory Shop Girl's pain. LOL.

Anyway, I'm really enjoying this story. And I'd love to see you do something with it. Because even though I love Wedding and Switched to death, it's sort of nice to see a story of yours that's closer to the current KH timeline. And I'm just a sucker for Xion and Aqua. They're my fav KH girls.

And might I say, thank you for not being biased when it comes to Xion/Roxas/Naminé. I mean, honestly. You can ship both. Days made me more of a Roxas/Xion fan (even though I'd liked Roxas and Nami in KH2). I mainly prefer Roxas and Xion just because we've seen more with them. But I still like both pairings. I just see it as: Roxas and Xion were in love, but she sadly died. And then after that, Roxas met Nami and fell for her. That doesn't mean he loves any girl less; he just moved on like anyone in real life probably would. And you can't even say it's unethical because, sadly, he doesn't remember Xion at the moment. So you can totally like both couples.

Until... everyone's revived in KH3 and then Roxas really will have to choose. I think when that time comes, I'm really going to ship Roxas/Accessory Shop Girl. LOL.

I also love said Accessory Shop Girl's reason for torturing Aqua. I mean, don't get me wrong. I love her. She's my second fav KH girl. I understood where she was coming from; I know she just accidentally voiced fears she really didn't believe... but BbS really was all her fault. She created the wedge between her trio and thus, as you had the Accessory Shop girl say, started the entire series in a way...

I should tell you that you write all the girls well. Save for having them be a little more snarky (especially in Naminé's case), and having them not be damsels (in Kairi and Naminé's case). But I actually prefer that, so kudos to you. It doesn't seem like we'll ever see those two be awesome in the games. In fact, it seems to me Kairi barely exists in the series anymore, which REALLY ticks me off.

But I love how you wrote Xion and Aqua. I think they were very IC. Which I'm glad for, because I've never really seen you write for them and, as said above, they're my favorites.

And I liked when Xion got tickled. Silly, Xi. I liked that part because it reminded me of Kairi and Nami's tickle torture in Wedding. And Xion, in a lot of ways, IS Kairi; it makes sense that she'd be as ticklish as them.

And I loved Xion's, "Faeries. Great," line. That was actually really in-character. Xion could be really sarcastic in Days, and this was hilarious! Your humor with Xion's is just epic.

The fact that Aqua said, to start this off, "Where am I?" was also funny. First in Yen Sid's tower, and now here. Aqua needs to remember where she's been better. LOL.

So this is really long, and I should probably shut up now, but amazing work! I hope you continue (even if updates aren't frequent). And I can't wait to see what you do next.

-Shanna

P.S. I love that they're in the Datascape. Nice reference to Coded (even though I despise that game). Will we be seeing some Data Naminé or anything like that? LOL.
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x-Destinys-Force-xHobbyist Writer
Honestly? I actually BASED the "antagonist" on that photo manip that you made. ;)

Seriously, I remembered seeing that picture, but I couldn't remember where I saw it before (or which shop she was from). Went searching for it, found it via Visitors then went from there. I didn't want a female OC to be their captor and anyone Final Fantasy was out. No point in making the captor male (especially if I decide to do a little revenge later :XD:) She was the only other female I could think of (considering that other than KH:CoM on GBA, I've never played any of the other KH games).

As for both Aqua and Xion's lines, they were actually just happy, little coincidences. I wrote all the exposition first and then just chose girls at random to talk. ^^; But I'm glad they worked out better than I planned. :meow:

The Coded datascape...was also a coincidence. I would love to take credit for the idea, but truth be told I had KH2 in my head. Completely forgot about Coded (shows how memorable it is =P), but I could probably use that...:evillaugh:

Although if I continue, I have to say that since Aqua's legal, I'm going to have to resist the urge to cross the PG-13 line. ^^;
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AnHeiressofaSOLDIERHobbyist Writer
Oh my gosh, it WAS? Wow. I'm honored that my idea inspired you this way. Thank you so much! I feel so flattered. Especially since I'm a huge fan of your work. This is like when a KH news site used my picture of Hayner, Pence, and Olette in their article; both totally made my day. LOL. Thank you!

Well, there might be another slight NCP you can use, but I don't know if you'll know her. She's this NCP in Traverse Town in KH1 that you can choose to talk to (I think she's the only girl NCP there). She stands outside that one restaurant. She also might be this girl in the manga around this point: [link] but I'm not positive. They kind of look different. They definitely act different, but she seems to be standing near the diner, so... I choose to believe the NCP from the game, and this girl in the manga are the same person.

It's kind of funny; when my sister and I first played Kingdom Hearts, we did so together. I was nine and she was twelve. It was our first video game, and we thought every character (even NCPs) would be extremely important. Especially since she was the first girl we'd seen since Destiny Islands. Somehow, we got it into our heads that she and Sora were going to fall in love, and Sora would have to choose between his love for her and his love for Kairi. Obviously that didn't happen! LOL. I think we called her Topeka. Mainly because my sister was having to memorize the states' capitols for school, and the capitol of Kansas stuck in her head.

Oh, nostalgia! I can't believe I remember all of that. That was ten years ago! I could seriously write a book on all the silly things I thought would happen in KH my first time playing it. LOL.

By the way, I have to say how impressive it is that you write KH so well when you've never played the games. I've seen a few authors that have done that, and you really can't tell at all. That's amazing. I know, personally, I remember things from games better if I've played it (and have not just watched it), so I can't imagine how you manage to write your stories so flawlessly. I know I couldn't if I were in your shoes. LOL.

I originally thought their captor in this was going to be Larxene. But I think you purposefully made us think that. Obviously, I love who you DID choose. LOL. I wonder if Larxene will be in this later...

Coded: Honestly, I enjoyed it when I played it. But that game really made no sense. And it wasn't needed. At all. The game should have just never existed, and I try to pretend it didn't. It just makes things even more complicated (part of me thinks it's only fair to save the Data people now because Coded messed with my head) when the needed aspects could have easily been explained in another game (or just guessed at).

Anyway... can't wait for an update on this and the rest of your stories!

-Shanna
the-tickling-master's avatar
For god's sake, please a series D:

That must be the first Aqua tickling fiction on the internets... Done by no one else than YOU.

Please, don't stop it now D:
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