BRED AND PURCHASED WYNGLING APPROVAL JOURNAL
Magic Class #20 (Intermediate): Week 4
Hi there, Cork is looking super cute and congratulations on being motm! There's just a few things to change before we can get him approved:
-The small defined claws are looking a bit too much like retractable claws. They should look more like little triangles.
-The mouth placement is a little too short! For that placement, it should go up to the second notch of the mouth.
-For the arm fins, each spike should be smaller than the last, with the bottom-most spike being the largest. Hopefully, this redline helps illustrate the edits that need to be made!
-On the last arm fin spike, there's a little dark grey placement. I am unsure if this was intentional or not, but could you please remove it?
Thank you, please reply to me here once you get those edits made so we can get him approved!
Peach is looking peachy keen! However, there's just a couple quick edits that need to be made to get her approved~
-Don't forget to include the wing and shell type in the description, as it's required for quills.
-I love what you're going for with the back marking and heart stamp, however it should overlap like the example here.
Reply to me here once you get those fixed up and we can get her approved!
Panthesilea is adorable! That is a beautiful purple color. There is just one thing before she can be approved:
-Looks like Pan is missing her magic gland! Just add that on and she's good to go!
Once the edit is made, reply back to me so we can get this baby approved!
Hello! Miu looks adorable, but is going to need a few changes before she can be approved.
-The body placement needs to come up to the mid-back and taper down to the bottom of the tail
-The tail is looking a little too long for a wyngling, make sure it tapers off like the below example
-The arm fins on a finn look a bit different than webbed wings do and are thicker near the bottom, tapering up towards the body
-Make sure the gills come to a point upwards towards the chin, as seen below in the example image and my edit
-For spots markings, make sure they don't become too small to where it becomes hard to even see the coloring. My edit helps show the appropriate size.
-Finn eye colors need to be vibrant. I had heard you were planning to use the accent blue color if this did not pass but unfortunately it is a bit too light colored still. I've made a suggestion as to what would work on the edit below.
I've made an edit to help you on some of these points as well as some general anatomy help. You're welcome to make similar edits on your own or upload this edit instead if you'd like.
Please reply back to me here when these changes have been made, thank you!
I always love seeing your art! Creek himself is looking very mellow. There's just one edit needed before we can get him approved:
-The back leg placement is too high. The example image below is what the placement should look like.
Once that leg placement is edited, reply back to me and we can get him all approved!