PinkyMcCoversong's Workshop: Results

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July 13, 2008

A word from Writers-Workshop: It was good to see so much participation in the workshop. PinkyMcCoversong's results are brief, as she got caught up in a lot of work. But she plans to come back and offer you guys some in depth critique.

:star: Special Mention: dreamscape-painter for this critique:…

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I truly loved GaioumonBatou's piece. This is the kind of enjambment that is striking - little unpredictable breaks that emphasize the statement being made, give pause, but aren't an awkward poke in the side or halt the forward motion of the piece.

I also rather enjoyed I Have to Tell You That by Viur, in its Williams-esque simplicity. What Williams did was take an every day, observational sentence and craft it into a poem using enjambment, and this piece is a fine nod at his process.

Congratulations everyone! Look out for our news article and journal with a workshop on romance.

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:excited: Hee that's brill! Thanks!