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Hello everyone, I'm currently trying to make a novel series following the story of Branden Ureki, his friends, and many hijinks situations that he (Unwillingly) gets involved in, its mostly a down-to-earth action story that mixes anime and cartoon tropes into it. I would also like to hear some feedback as well since I have tons of ideas for new abilities and gimmicks (but I worry that i might either over or never used them in the series) thank you and good.....(should I mention I writing this down to make a game , cause improving and rewriting it is what I like to do before adding more)

Chapter 1 – The High School Kid | Looking for feedback!

> Hi everyone! 😊

I’ve just published Chapter 1 of a supernatural coming-of-age story I’m developing, titled “The Biscuit Curse.”

This is part of a 27-chapter series I’m working on as a collaboration. Chapter 1 introduces Gary Wadeworth, a high school basketball player whose life begins to change in mysterious ways after a game — and a strange biscuit.

📘 Read Chapter 1 here:

https://www.deviantart.com/.../Chapter-1-The-High-School...

💬 I’d really appreciate your thoughts or suggestions:

– What did you think of Gary as a protagonist?

– Would you like to see more suspense, character development, or action in Chapter 2?

– Any favorite (or unclear) moments?

Thanks in advance to anyone who reads — even a short comment helps! 🙏

I’ll be continuing the series step-by-step and improving along the way based on feedback.

Scorched Neon history backstory (UPDATED)Scorched Neon is an alternate 1980s post-apocalyptic world. It involves imagery such as mutated anthropomorphic animals that walk upright, blending a mixture of themes similar to cassette futurism and cyberpunk realities. In 1984, scientists started to build robo-tv heads. Throughout the years they invented cassette futuristic cars, phones, computers even hologram traffic lights. Fairfax City was constructed in 1988 in Washington state and was built into a concrete dome city. In 1991 Underground cities were constructed over the years in preparation for the nuclear war. The American scientist conducts experiments by creating anthropomorphic animals with radiation. In 2083 Mayor of Los Angeles was renamed into Neuvo Angeles. On December 12, 2084, a group of disguised semi-trucks was used by Russian spies to set five of semi trucks explosion and three of the trucks sent a group of terrorists to kill 900 innocent people (for example Trojan Horse) On the night of December 18, 2084 nuclear war broke out. Russians started to launch nuclear missiles and were impacted at 11:59 p.m. On May 14, 1985, a green glow rain storm (aka radioactive rain) started pouring out around the globe on every continent as a result of developing a mixture of anthropomorphic animals, plants, clay, bugs, etc. People lived underground city for years. On the early morning of August 12, 2098, Radiation was completely cleared up. People from the underground were creating their own individual factions. The second Civil War between Fairfax of America and New America began in 2121. Fairfax is an evil corrupt faction and wants patriotism in the wrong way by forcing children to join the army and enslaving innocent mutated animals. In 2159, one of the Underground City in Northern California was attacked by Fairfax troops, and many children to trained to be soldiers Including Xander along with his sister April. Ten Years later, Xander and his sister manage to escape to Fairfax City to lay low and meet friends to stop evil. I would like some feed for my Scorched Neon series.