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Chapter 1 – The High School Kid | Looking for feedback!

> Hi everyone! 😊

I’ve just published Chapter 1 of a supernatural coming-of-age story I’m developing, titled “The Biscuit Curse.”

This is part of a 27-chapter series I’m working on as a collaboration. Chapter 1 introduces Gary Wadeworth, a high school basketball player whose life begins to change in mysterious ways after a game — and a strange biscuit.

📘 Read Chapter 1 here:

https://www.deviantart.com/.../Chapter-1-The-High-School...

💬 I’d really appreciate your thoughts or suggestions:

– What did you think of Gary as a protagonist?

– Would you like to see more suspense, character development, or action in Chapter 2?

– Any favorite (or unclear) moments?

Thanks in advance to anyone who reads — even a short comment helps! 🙏

I’ll be continuing the series step-by-step and improving along the way based on feedback.