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Adam's Comments:  Heheh... Yeah, this was a pretty fun-but-weird page establishing that Maggi WILL be taking a higher position in Hazel's positoin. Which.... Given how insane and volatile he is, would be for the best. Honestly, having a wiser presence like this is maybe the worst thing that can happen to the heroes. ^^

Also just nicely emphasizes just how overblown and hedonistic Hazel's leadership is getting.... Really been enjoying him jumping off the slippery slope.

REALLY tired, so can't go into this further, but really like how this one came out. ^^

Martin's Comments:  Yeah, this was the big reason it was decided to go back and add a page in the previous chapter more strongly laying the groundwork for Maggi's presence in the group then. She's not just some random busybody around the place, she's someone who'll be more directly reporting to Hazel as kind of a second-in-command.

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Her being an assassin was alluded to a bit in that page, both how Xmarlek seemed to be speaking euphemistically about her skills and Hazel pretty much directly asking her to kill people then. Kind of one of those things that just looks like he was being a smartass at the time.

Admittedly I do think this page maybe feels a little clumsy due to having to work around the existing chapter structure of cramming everything into one page; probably would've flowed more organically if done under other circumstances where two or three pages could go into it. Still, we'll see the furthering of this dynamic as we go forward.

This is the last page of the chapter for most of the characters in it, but we'll be seeing Hazel again within the next three pages. Kind of occurs to me it feels a little odd that there's no sign of Dewayne in this page but maybe he's just offscreen or something, don't take his absence to mean he's being shuffled aside comparatively or something. Really been wanting to do a lot throughout this chapter to kind of grow out Hazel's crew from just him, Verbren, and Luciana to adding several more names to his inner circle.
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