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Adam's Comments:  Heh... Yeah, just a reminder that as much as Misty and Sareena have on their plate, Day is still keeping their eye on the pair of them. Whoever the mysterious bene/malefactor is, they've clearly got more planned going forward.

Not sure how much else I have to say, this is a pretty basic one.... Am really digging how Jake looks in that jacket. Was wearing it in the New Years Eve party and juts thought it'd be a good one to bring back. She wound up totally rocking it, right?

Martin's Comments:  Heads up, Monday's going to be the year 12 preview rather than the next page. Only four left in the chapter so tempting to go ahead and wrap it up, but could use the breathing room anyway.

Yeah, I think this last page with them kind of more clearly brings together what the overarching theme of Sareena and Misty's leg of this chapter is, how at the moment they're kind of being pulled around in all directions and being kept busy. Day's just one of many to be making moves, seemingly motivated by the unexpected reunion on Christmas Eve.

I'd actually at a point been planning to have Day more directly get involved in this chapter than this, but it felt awkward to fit in within the single page structure of things; think this route works out better anyway, just kind of casually left a note they discover while returning home. It kind of makes for a bit of an additional callback in having them bump into Jake while doing this; Sareena previously bumped into Jake while heading back home when she got seed from Five after talking to White Noise. Sort of brings things full-circle a little having similar circumstances for Day reaching out to them again.

Do feel like I should maybe assure that we will be advancing one of those lingering threads very soon; most things within this chapter are leading up to the next one with largely the same principle players, so not all of this mentioned here is going to be lingering over things unanswered for forever by any means.
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