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Martin's Comments:  Yeah, this is kind of where the things with that scrawny guy, Todd, and the fight club Hazel's running have been building up to, another sign of just how manipulative and eager to take advantage of people Hazel can be. Similarly we're also seeing the continued formation of Hazel's King's Circle; that has been something I was really wanting to put a lot of attention to in this chapter, Hazel growing his inner circle from just Verbren, Luciana, and Dewayne and adding Todd, Donna, and her bodyguard (who isn't named until a later page, but his name is Callan).

Really wanted to put over the sadism of what Hazel's doing here, including in regards to the amount of pain that Todd's sustained in the interest of getting in his good graces. Admittedly I do think the page could have maybe been a bit more dynamically framed than it wound up being but do like how the wounds on Todd turned out, plus that evil grin of Hazel's.

It's kind of odd to think just how little time we have left to go in this chapter, actually. As is likely very apparent there are 7 more pages left to come; mentioned on the previous one that the next Black Court one is the last with them for the chapter, but Hazel has more than that still to come. We'll touch in on that when we get there but hoping everyone will enjoy what's yet to come.

Adam's Comments:   Yeah, this is kind of where the things with that scrawny guy, Todd, and the fight club Hazel's running have been building up to, another sign of just how manipulative and eager to take advantage of people Hazel can be. Similarly we're also seeing the continued formation of Hazel's King's Circle; that has been something I was really wanting to put a lot of attention to in this chapter, Hazel growing his inner circle from just Verbren, Luciana, and Dewayne and adding Todd, Donna, and her bodyguard (who isn't named until a later page, but his name is Callan).

Really wanted to put over the sadism of what Hazel's doing here, including in regards to the amount of pain that Todd's sustained in the interest of getting in his good graces. Admittedly I do think the page could have maybe been a bit more dynamically framed than it wound up being but do like how the wounds on Todd turned out, plus that evil grin of Hazel's.

It's kind of odd to think just how little time we have left to go in this chapter, actually. As is likely very apparent there are 7 more pages left to come; mentioned on the previous one that the next Black Court one is the last with them for the chapter, but Hazel has more than that still to come. We'll touch in on that when we get there but hoping everyone will enjoy what's yet to come.

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