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I draw stuff.

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Thanks for the crit! I appreciate you taking the time. Glad you liked the image.
Love Biter
Thanks for the encouragement! =D
Beer Metal Mako
I think perhaps that it's always going to be a bit of an "in-joke". I think because it's an Australian beer, that it hinges a bit on having knowledge of Australian beer. I never really considered how non Australian peoples would read it, but considering it was for an exhibition in an Australian bar I think that it works well enough.

Yeah, short comics are so hard for me. I always write such long roundabout stories, that trying to condense anything down to 10 pages or less is so very hard. But, it's all good practise. =)
Beer Metal Mako
Wow. Thanks for a good solid critique! I appreciate you taking the time to do this.

The inconsistency of the face is something I do consider to be my biggest problem in general, and I feel like I'm flipping between styles all the time. I think this comes down to practice, as when I drew this comic I was in the middle of redeveloping the character's look, and I think that subconsciously I was changing from idea to idea. Which is always a bad plan!

Ahahaa! That's cool, there's really not much joke to get. I was trying to play on the expectation that the drunk would pull out the beer and drink it, and I went the completely opposite way with it. The beer in question, Tooheys Old, is an Australian black ale, and it happens to the the only beer I drink. Most people consider it to be too strong and taste like burnt toast. So again, I was playing on the perceived potency of the beer (as in it blew up a building).

I do personally find it hard to write short comics, and comedy in general is not my forte.

Again, thanks for the critique! I appreciate the feedback. =)
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wraithdragon commented on HONEY #1 by KatMiLo

Heckin' cute!!! Loving the style, and the colouring is so buttery smooth that it's making my mouth water! :D