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Hai everybody,

Enjoy some feely visual poetry today. I wrote it for someone whom I miss very much and I want to give them some strength, because I am nice like that xD

Hope you all like it ^^

- Chennie

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:iconmichel-le-fou:
OK. So finally I see and appreciate a longer page that will give me enough food for thought. Here you are.
First, the slant rhyme pattern was clever., I remember that American poetess Emily Dickinson liked to write slant rhymes in her love poetry. So you are off to a fine start. Second, is that you have applied traditional stanza form. I am not always a Classical poet; but I have been educated long with that style and form and still pursue it. You are doing fine with this too. We seem to have much in common as poets. I like that.
Third is that you expressed your feeling smoothly and fully in only eight lines, which, I am sure you noticed about my "Puabi poetry", is also my current style. Good reading!
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PickyPepper Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A really beautiful piece...and another feather in your cap :D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2017  Professional Writer
Thank you for enjoying it my friend :'3

- Chennie
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017
Simple, sweet and so very romantic!!:love:
Whoever this is for should feel lucky!!:D
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2017  Professional Writer
I hope that they do feel that way ^^

- Chennie
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2017
Yeah, so do I!!:dance::D
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IShouldntSay Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I want to share these words with someone as they sum up my feelings perfectly. 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Professional Writer
GO right ahead friend, these poems are meant to be shared ^^

- Chennie
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TgeMiddle Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I try not to add cheesy poems but this one brought up memories of my past which recently I fight with and refuse to put into words so thanks for expressing what I can not ya ass XD
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Professional Writer
haha, in the end you will love it :'3

- Chennie
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