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Angel of Mine by WordOfChen Angel of Mine by WordOfChen
Hey everyone,

Today I decided to make a piece that'll wound you heavily in the feels :'3

Why? Because I CAN! Haha, please tell me if you loved it, because I made it with plenty of feely feels!

- Chennie

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So here is a general critique. Towards the last one too.

To start, I am much impressed with your endeavor at visual poetry, because I remember that we did not write it before. In both cases, your background was a good choice. Regarding verse, here, i noticed immediately that you rhymed the second, third and last lines. There may be a rhythm in this poem, which i will detect when i can. Your choice of type and color is also good. My only contrary opinion is that I would like to read a longer verse; but this may be all you wanted to say. On both counts, a good effort. Cheers!
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TgeMiddle Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
this poem both hurts and warms my heart lolol words which i shall never hear for reasons never shared
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2016  Professional Writer
There there xD Thank you for reading ^^

- Chennie
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miki94 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is unnerving. A sociopath talking to their victim.

The mood is set somehow casually about it which may only reflect a lack of empathy that is intended. But if not, I'm with Slashh-20000. I hope the message isn't that the one crying should fall in love once again.
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Professional Writer
Is that how it looks phahaha xD

Man, some people do have twisted views. It represents nothing like that :'P

- Chennie
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miki94 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And yeah, very much a wife-beater mood right here. xD
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miki94 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay Neko Emoji-18 (Cheer) [V1] 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Professional Writer
Lol furthest thing from that mood believe me =3=, but I guess I can see how people who have that experience might relate to it :'P

- Chennie
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miki94 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:/ I didn't. 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016  Professional Writer
It's okay, like I said, people can have their own interpretations. I'm just surprised it was seen that way rofl

- Chennie
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miki94 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I see. :O
I just immediately thought of that Eminem and Rihana song: Love The Way You Lie sad nod 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2016  Professional Writer
Never heard it :'P

- Chennie
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Mega-Gear Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016
loving all the visual poetry man not sure if I agree with the message but great poem 
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Professional Writer
Lol, the message is supposed to be straight forward, but I suppose people are open to interpretation

- Chennie
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Mega-Gear Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016
nah its just old principle chen by the way your gaming channel sucks jk jk dont really mean it lol
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016  Professional Writer
If it did, you wouldn't bother telling me :'P

- Chennie
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Mega-Gear Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2016
its not bad 
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