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Physically...Hind legs...are disproportionately short.
Fore legs are too thin. The shadow is not correct. Shifting the oval shadow down a bit more may help even if the shape is off.

I like the bright touch on the right ear which balances well with the tail and lock of hair.

The tattoo feature on the left ear adds a uniqueness to this otherwise simple practice.

The bright green sparks on the left ear are meant for anything? Or is it just accidentally missing out on these erased details which allowed the background to shine through?

Other than looking like a simple practice, this will require more personal styling before coming through as a piece of art, and not just a practice drawing. Good nice clean lines though. I like the simple handling of some tufts of hair here and there helping to make it look like fur and not a hard skin.
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AskTigerfang Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AMAZING
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Wolf--Prime Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^-^
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terrorisnear Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*le gasp* OMG I LOVE THISS!!!
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Wolf--Prime Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^ I'm glad you love it :3
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terrorisnear Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't love it....


I ADORE IT!!!
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:iconwolf--prime:
Wolf--Prime Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^-^
it was the least I could do.
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terrorisnear Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omgersh we need to tlk more. ;u;
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Wolf--Prime Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I agree ^w^
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terrorisnear Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wrud
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Wolf--Prime Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
^-^ well I'll have to talk to you tomorrow. I got to finish up Algebra 2 homework before bed.
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