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Please, be honest, I want to know if you like them or not

1- Ayume Maruko - あ夢マルコ
Ayume Maruko KEI style by wizardotaku
Info(Wikia): utau.wikia.com/wiki/Maruko_Ayu…
Voice demo(ACT 5): www.youtube.com/watch?v=pPGCdt…
Voicebank DL: www.mediafire.com/?qzpr3apsz30…


2- Heiwane Maruko - 平和音マルコ
Heiwane Maruko RELEASE!!! by wizardotaku
Info(Masterloid Website): masterloid.weebly.com/
Voice demo(CV): www.youtube.com/watch?v=JcrfjN… (VCV): www.youtube.com/watch?v=kpyvLp…
Voicebank DL: -On website-

PLEASE BE TOTALY HONEST!! I can handle it ^^
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:icondistordedcatharsis:
DistordedCatharsis Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Veo que te gustan los diseños simples así que no criticaré eso (para mi mientras más sobrecargados mejor xD), criticaré solo la voz.
Para ser honesta, la de Maruko Ayume no me gusta (lo encuentro muy nasal >.>), a veces no lo, pero la Maruko Heiwane es muy buena!! me gusta bastante, es bien clarito pa cantar :D
Sorry si mi crítica es muy subjetiva, no sé realmente qué criticar porque no suenan mal...eso sí, deberías meterle más mano al oto.ini, suenan un poco entrecortado a veces, pero nada que no se pueda arreglar :) sigue así!
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wizardotaku Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
muchas gracias >w<, sii~ a Maruko Ayume le cambiare la voz y ya tengo su nuevo diseño que revelare cuando pueda hacer su nueva voz, Heiwane esta bien, no lo cambiare, solo le hare un ACT2 VCV+CV porque su VCV actual si tiene unos errores y estatica~
gracias~ n_n
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:icondistordedcatharsis:
DistordedCatharsis Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
de nada, que bueno que tengas tanto entusiasmo :)
me gustaría usar el voicebank español de Heiwane algún día ^^
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:iconaraxcatax:
AraxCatax Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yo creo que los dos suenan muy bien, lo que no me gusta es el diseño.
Ninguno de los dos es muy llamativo, y la gente tiende a juzgar las cosas por la portada, a si que te recomiendo le añadas algunas cosas para que llamen mas la atención :)
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wizardotaku Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student General Artist
bien ^^ pero la verdad no pienso cambiar los diseños....ellos fueron hechos asi y asi seran >:33 ademas no quiero llamar la atencion, aprecio mucho todas las opiniones, para eso hice esto, pero los Vocaloid/UTAU no fueron hechos para llamar la atencion por como son o se vean, si no por sus voces (eso es lo que voy a mejorar cuando tenga un nuevo mic TTwTT....)
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AraxCatax Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
La voz para mi suena muy bien o.O

Claro es verdad, el gran brillo de Utau es la voz, para eso es, en si, el programa, pero como te decía, la gente suele juzgar por la portada y es mas probable que menos gente llegue a escuchar a tu utau.
Aunque era solo una "critica" que tu pediste, y vine a donar mi grano de arena. Que lo tomes o lo dejes, es tu decisión, si te sientes cómodo con lo que ya tienes, pues, vulgarmente hablando, a la mierda. Sigue poniéndole con todo no mas!
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wizardotaku Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Student General Artist
si entiendo a que te refieres ^^ y aprecio mucho tu honesta opinion o critica >w<
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AkiraChal Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like their voices, but I prefer a more deeper and stronger voice for Ayume (but his voice is so cute that I can't say no to listen to it xD) and for their designs. I think they are a little to 'little' on Heiwane's design. I you could maybe add some extra to it so it could look more unique (but not too much) but I know his design is based of off you and I think he looks pretty cute. Ayume's design looks maybe a little too much vocaloid-ish with the sleeves and the leg-warmers but he's very adorable.

And I love them both xD
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glaciachan Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
For Ayume, I think he'd sound better if he had a lower, maybe more boyish voice? Heiwane's voice is fine, IMO.

Now, design wise...I think that both are a little bland. In particular, Ayume's arm-warmers/leg warmers make him look a bit too Crypton cookie-cutter, I guess? What I would do is replace the leg-warmers with socks and tennis shoes or something and do away with the arm-warmers completely. Although, you could still implement the equalizers/headphones/etc, in a different way. I think what would also help is if you thought "what am I going for in this design?" If you keep a basic concept for a design in your head, it makes it much easier to put it together.
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Heiwane's outfit is totally bland. Now, I understand that this UTAU is based off of yourself, but, for a casual/normal outfit to be pulled off on an UTAU, or an OC in general, it needs to be arranged in a way that looks unique Now, in particular, I think the top half if the outfit would be improved if maybe a coat or something else were added. Or, you could maybe add more detail to it? There are tons of ways, really. The basic elements are alright, but adding a few details here or there (without going overboard!) would make the design a little better. Also, the headset really isn't integrated into the rest of the design well, IMO. I think if you integrated it in a different way (for example, change the design of it, or even make it a different kind of mic!), it would look better

In addition, I think the hairstyles look a little generic. This isn't as much of an issue, however, and if the other parts of the designs are improved, it wouldn't be as noticeable. :>

Anyway, if you need any resources, I would highly suggest lookbook.nu, or, you could even look at online clothing stores for ideas. Don't just limit yourself to what "makes an UTAU design." Well, that's it I guess. I hope this helps. You don't have to follow this advice, but this is just what my friends and I found worked in the process of making designs for OC's and UTAU's alike.
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wizardotaku Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww thanks so much for commenting >w<
Actually Heiwane is the real me, me and just me~ I was thinking of adding more, but I prefer this cuz that are my fav clothes =w= and the headphones I use~
Ayume was designed that way on purpose ^^ to look like crypton vocaloids/or Teto Kasane)(He was my first UTAU >w<)
and REALLY thanks for the recommendations ^^
I will record a VCV+CV for Ayume ^^ I will follow your advice about a more-boyish voice X33
Heiwane can sing both (high and low pitches >w<)
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Tempo-Beat-Desu Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
They both sound like they would be much better pitched down. I think the oto might be off.
I might download one to try it out.
Which one is priority for me to download to try?
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wizardotaku Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
I'll choice Ayume for you~ ^^ thanks for beeing honest ^^
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Tempo-Beat-Desu Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok thank you. I will play with him some and tell you what I think.
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wizardotaku Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
Yay thankies >w< I want to hear it soon ^^
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Tempo-Beat-Desu Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It sounds like you need a new mic or something.
The oto is a little off, but not too bad. It could be a very cute voice. I prefer deeper stronger sounds. Did you have to whisper to record or something? Maybe you were too far away from the mic
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wizardotaku Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
maybe TTwTT but I have no mic now.....
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:icontempo-beat-desu:
Tempo-Beat-Desu Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well he sounds cute is the other one a stronger voice?
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wizardotaku Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student General Artist
no no no no XP Heiwane means peace sound.....so nope, but I want to make a VCV+CV for Ayume (a new voice) more strong and a WHISPER append and for Heiwane I'll make an ACT2 and a SHOUT +extraVOICE(like append with another name XDXDD)
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