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Bae vs Feriae - Joust Pas d'Armes

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Baelfire vs Feriae. Needless to say, Feriae was just a tad bit surprised by Bae's decent from the air.
Bae is my boy and Feriae is by Aedrielle

Chime points:
Colored Fullbody: +4
Detailed Background: +2
Total: +6

Chime bonus for Bae in joust: +4
Bae's total: +10

Pose references: Akhal 49 and Grey Andalusian Buck
Faber-Castell watercolor pencils on 9"x12" watercolor paper





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Hello! I am here for #Critmas2020 :dummy:



This is a beautiful piece with lots of color and movement~ the designs of the horses/Pegasus are awesome! I love that they are not traditional patterns or styles for horses. The black marks make the Pegasus look like it’s in constant motion due to how they stretch out, it just adds a cool effect overall.



My critique/ advice would be, the wings on the Pegasus are light against the light sky background. If there was a way to darken them or maybe even make the sky a little more blue to help the wings pop out more, I think that would help the Pegasus to be more visible over all.



All in all, a very nice piece! I love the detail and the horses look great! :D



All the best and happy critmas!



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