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Muslim Manga Month 4 - Page4

By Wilpan
Submit for MMM contest in :iconmuslim-manga: month 4
Really bad in English dialogue, need more critique

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Tittle : Ima
Episode : Hijab
Page : 4 of 8

Cover : [link]
Page1 : [link]
Page2 : [link]
Page3 : [link]
Page4 : [link]
Page5 : [link]
Page6 : [link]
Page7 : [link]
Page8 : [link]
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Lianthanis's avatar
Well ... I think here you could say "I've missed you" instead of "I miss you".

Cause I think they haven't seen each other for a while, right?
Wilpan's avatar
ohoho, that's right :D
i'll correct soon :hug:
thanks for take attention for my manga :love:
Lianthanis's avatar
As I said : I like it :)