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Muslim Manga Month 3 - Page1

By Wilpan
Submit for MMM contest in :iconmuslim-manga: month 3
Really bad in English dialogue, need more critique

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Tittle : Husna
Episode : Soolah Jum'ah
Page : 1 of 6
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narkAlmasy's avatar
Hmm~ I'm not sure is it your style of drawing or what~ But I still want to critic~ I think you need to make it more solid~ like using ruler to make lines~ Something like that~ I hope this comment doesn't offend you~ ^^
Wilpan's avatar
haha~

i'm so appreciated for it,
about the critic, i'm so thank you, this is my style when the deadline is coming, haha~
i will trying more neat and solid line in the future,

ofcourse your critic not offended me, because i thought you're right, i'm sure i will better when i do your suggestion,
don't worry, i'm happy :D
:iconxd--plz:
narkAlmasy's avatar
^^; Fuh~ Thank God you didn't mind~ ^^;
I once gave out critic and that person is so angry at me~ That's why~ ^^

But the message is good~ That's what important~ ^^v
MusliMultimedia's avatar
critique is the key of success you know c:
narkAlmasy's avatar
Yup~ I agree with you~ :nod:
Yeah~ I don't understand why she get so angry when I critique her artwork~(no~Not her artwork, her FRIEND'S artwork~ ^^; ) It's not that I'm being rude or something~ I just said something like "The head is a little bit big~" ^^;
Wilpan's avatar
haha~
peace..
cool down guys.. :D
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