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Muslim Manga Month 2 - Page4

By Wilpan
Submit for MMM contest in :iconmuslim-manga: month 2
Really bad in English dialogue, need more critique

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Tittle : Ima
Episode : Pork
Page : 4 of 4
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AndSoWeCreate's avatar
The first part should be phrased "We should have beef rather than pork."

"I learned something new from you, I am so thankful."
Wilpan's avatar
what the thing that you was learn? :D
CrAzy-LAzy's avatar
nice one,, I liked it! :D
Wilpan's avatar
i'm so so thank you,
sukron katsiro~

:iconimsorryplz:
CrAzy-LAzy's avatar
LOL! Shokran Kathiran? :D

that's how it's said ;P

you're verry welcome..
afwan =)
Wilpan's avatar
jazakumullah,

thanks for correcting me about the word "Shokran Kathiran",

:icongrin--plz:
CrAzy-LAzy's avatar
LOL! I think I'll give Arabic classes now

I hated this subject at school!>_<"
only loved the old arabian poems =)
Qais: aaaah ya Laila ,, LOL
CrAzy-LAzy's avatar
haha,, I meant.. I hated studying Arabic.. back when I was at school..

but now I'm giving Arabic classes? hehe!

+ I liked the old Arabic poets :)
such as Qais words :)

(Qais is a guy who was crazy about a girl called Laila):P
Wilpan's avatar
wow,
that's great!
you seriously doing what you hated,
:)

goodluck~
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Shirei-Shou's avatar
sukses yah
idenya bagus
smga berhasil dg kontesnya
Wilpan's avatar
weleh :w00t:
udah selesai mbak yu,
alhmdulillah juara 3 dari 4, kakakak
doain di bulan ini bisa menang :p

terimakasih atas semangatnya :boogie:
Shirei-Shou's avatar
yay syukurlah
ikut ga yah bulan dpn wahahah
ad ide t[ ga tau sempet apa kaga
Wilpan's avatar
oh,
ikut aja~
:D

ciayoo~
Shirei-Shou's avatar
iyah dicoba. tp masih malas baca rulesnya wahahah
Wilpan's avatar
wekekek,

-pokoknya kudu join grup,
ga pake nudity,
-topik yang dibahas seputar agama atau politik,
-minimal 4 halaman,
-jangan lupa dikasih cover,
-ditutup setiap akhir bulan, tanggal terakhir setiap bulannya,
-pemenang ditentukan berdasar materi, gambar dan kerapian cerita,
-yang dinilai berdasar polling seluruh anggota grup muslim-manga,
:)

mungkin hanya itu yang perlu diperhtikan..
:D

jika ada pertanyaan lebih lanjut, silakan hubungi admin yang terkait :D

ciayooo~
Shirei-Shou's avatar
cih min 4 halamannya itu loh. gua cm ada ide wat 1 halaman. bisa aja panjangin. tp malas wahahahah
Wilpan's avatar
wakaka~
ya 1 halaman 1 gambar :D
hahaha~ *ala mbah surip*
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Yarra95's avatar
Bakal lebih bagus lagi kalau dijelasin dengan lebih spesifik kenapa babi itu haram.

Kayak, karena ada larva yang ngga akan mati walau dipanasin di dalam tubuh babi, gitu.
Wilpan's avatar
oh,
trims kritik dan sarannya,
sangat saya hargai dan sungguh saran yang membangun~
:D

soalnya saya lebih juga menimbang seberapa ringan materi yang disampaikan, serta seberapa banyak dialog yang membuat pembaca merasa bosan, karena itu saya cuman mengambil inti bahwa daging babi haram karena memang mengandung cacing parasit dan kotoran, itu aja..
:D

soalnya aku takut, pembaca akan bosan dengan dialog yang seabreg, didukung kemampuan menggambar saya yang pas-pasan, haha~

terimakasih, terimakasih,
akan saya tambah lagi bobot hikmah yang disampaikan untuk ke depannya,
:w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t:
Yarra95's avatar
Sama-sama, semoga menang yah!
Wilpan's avatar
amien,
terimakasih atas segala bentuk support
baik berupa saran, kritik dan juga doanya,
:D
Steamrider86's avatar
Cute and interesting comic. ^_^
Wilpan's avatar
so thank you,
:hug:
but this comic need more and more improvement to become a good comic
:D
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