Thanks so much for the kind words. Your Critiques always give me something to work toward on my next piece. It’s hard to see what’s good and bad with your own work. I always judge it by the ideal image I had in my head which isn’t helpful.
I’m glad you like the squiggle lines in the hair there something I’ve brought over from my letter work. Now I know there not to ridiculous i’m going to work them into my style more.
Thanks for the tips on the shadows and eyes will work on that. As for the long hair over the face, your right that should have had a darker shadow on it. Both the shadow and the hair are the last things to go on and it’s almost impossible to fix mistakes with them without building up the tones of the whole section again. It was late on day 2 by the time I put the hair on and it was raining and when I saw the shadow wasn’t dark enough I didn’t have the heart to start over. Will make sure I leave time for that next time.
Thanks again for taking the time to Critique my work. It really motivates me to improve.