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PSA: Sneezing



I remembered that vampires don't breathe only after drawing this.

I did have the PSA announcement handwritten, but my scanner absolutely murdered it.

Dracula (c) Bram Stoker.
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Well, while I concur your assertion that the sneeze is not echoed dynamically through the entire image, thus diminishing the holistic effect, this is not an egregious artistic offense, quite the contrary, in fact, as the key focus of the piece withdraws from the obvious into an apparently classic pose, the viewer is presented with an amusingly abrupt paradigm shift by the text, thus, you have effectively increased thematic impact with the decrease of visual explicitness.

This sentence in honor of Baroness Emmuska Orczy.