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This every day pain
Is tearing me apart
Breaking me down
Tell I don't stand a chance
So I when say
Save me now
I'm screaming for help
It's my last chance
I'm screaming
And no one seems to hear
Or maybe they just don't care
You've been alone for so long
And it's messing with your head
So break down on a daily bases
Never knowing where to go
Screaming for help
But no one will ever come
You'll be alone now and forever
No it's not true
Just the voices in your head
Making you cry
Breaking you down
And I tell you now
Come save me
And take the pain away
Save from the never ending solitude
All the pain of yesterday
Erase my memory
I don't what to feel again
Just shoot me now
Saving me from the pain of yesterday
Erasing my memory
And I won't feel again
It was going to be a song but it didn't want to be a song...
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Hyurikken Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015
Have ever you listen Please, please, please, let me get what i want by The Smiths?
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WhiteBleedingFox Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I just listen to it and I like its a very nice song maybe I should write a poem about it.
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Hyurikken Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015
Don't know why this remind me to that song...
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WhiteBleedingFox Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I can kinda see it. 
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foxplant Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful, I have a poem with The same title and feelings, its great to know that someone else feels what you do <3 you've got a great gallery by the way!
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WhiteBleedingFox Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh thank you! ;p
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foxplant Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Red Fox Friend's 3 you're welcome
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ClaireBear26 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Okay, sometimes I don't know if this is just a random poem or if it's how you feel, and your life.  But..is there something wrong? You seemed alright yesterday. :)
But..good poem. :)
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WhiteBleedingFox Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I hardly ever write random poems... and it didn't change here.
Thanks.
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ClaireBear26 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Ah alright.. :( No prob.
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WhiteBleedingFox Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Smile Claire ;p
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ClaireBear26 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Nu. :(
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