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:iconwhatzitoya:
I really like the mood that this piece sets and the angle works really well with the image. However, I feel like the image is a little too dark by the character. The only way I can see such dark shadows on the character working is if he is coming out of the shadows or is being consumed by shadows (I don't know if this is what you were going for so I can only assume). Also, since it looks like the image has some strong back lighting, I feel as though the character should show some interaction with the back lighting, such as adding some border lighting to the character by his head and wings as well as the parts in shadow. This would help you to define the shape better. All in all, this is a great piece! Keep it up :)
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CatastrophicCyle Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist
Well thank you I am just a starter so yeah DX, But thanks for the advice to help with this :) means a lot to me :).
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whatzitoya Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
You're very welcome :) All you have to do is keep going and you'll get even better in no time :)
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CatastrophicCyle Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist
Thank you :O
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