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Why do you try to hurt me so much?
You lied to me, cheated, betrayed all my trust.
And now you're telling me it's my fault; that I am to blame?
That you love me no more, that it just ain't the same?
You've gone and made your bed and now *I* have to sleep in it,
You just wanted your cake and you wanted to eat it
You wanted some space and that's fine, but do tell:
Why you couldn't have space and then see me as well?
You say you need to see your friends, that they're always there,
But take a good look at them all, do they honestly care?
They'd rather see you lonely than with someone like me
Because I want time together, want us to be free.
They were threatened by me because once, way back then
You'd rather see me than go and see them.
I'm sick and tired now of being your little secret,
Your friends can't mean that much to you or you wouldn't keep it.
You lied to us all, it's just a game to you,
You play with my feelings, can't see it from my view.
Don't you remember when you said we were forever?
You wanted to move in, marry, be together.
You convinced me and all of my friends it was true
That I was all that you wanted; just me and you.
But then you got bored, and instead broke my heart
You slept with some slapper, my world crashed apart
We had a great sex life, "best you've ever had",
So why'd you sleep with her when you're gay - you're just mad.
Are you lashing out to me, knew that was worst you could do?
Or if you're still unsure what you are - then you and me are through.
You asked for forgiveness after just a few weeks,
Say it's been hell without me, can't get no sleep,
Say you've missed me so much, you love me, you've changed,
Now its a month later and you're exactly the same.
Even though you are with me, I'm still so alone.
You never even bother to pick up the phone,
I go days without hearing from you, it hurts me so much
Surely if you loved me you'd want to keep in touch.
Sometimes when I lay at night and I cry,
I can actually feel a small part of me die,
The part that loves you, trusts you, wants us to be wed.
The same's happened to you - the man I fell in love with is dead.
Now you say you're having "so much fun without me"
Well you better get used to it - it's how its gonne be.
We were 2 years in the making - proper fairytale come true
Now its 12 months later and I'm not in love with you
I wrote this while I was very very annoyed at my boyfriend. You'll get the gist of things if you read it. This is the first *ever* time I've written any poetry so forgive me if its not in the right category or if its a bit shit. Anyways, read on...
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myvampireheart Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2006
wow that's really good
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crack-whore-angel Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2004   Writer
yay bunny! Great first piece :) I really like, flows well, "Say you've missed me so much, you love me, you've changed,Now its a month later and you're exactly the same." <-that Says it all really.
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webbunny Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2004
Aww thanks charli! And welcome to dA :D can't wait to see your stuff x
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happyella Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2004
wow...eat chocolate icecream. always makes me feel better if i'm in the kind of mood where my poetry turns out sad.. it's good, especially for your first try :)
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webbunny Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2004
:) comment much appreciated. I'm heading for the ice cream right now, heh. x
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happyella Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2004
icecream is always, always a good idea:)
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